Question

【题目】一家英语报社向中学生征文，主题是“十年后的我”，请根据下列要求和你的想象完成短文。

家庭、工作、业余生活

注意：1、词数100左右；2、可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3、开头语已为你写好

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future.

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Answer 1

【答案】

I often imagine what my life will be like in the future. I think my life will be very different in ten years. I will be twenty-eight years old by then. I will have my own family. Probably with a lovely child. I hope I will work in a computer company as a program designer. I will enjoy my work and get along well with my colleagues, I will do a good job in whatever I do. In my free time, I will continue to take regular exercise, such as swimming, running and various ball games. On my holidays, I will travel around the world. In a word, my life will be much richer and more colorful.

【解析】

试题分析：题目要求根据要求和自己的想象写一篇短文，主题是“十年后的我”。要求有1、家庭；2、工作；3、业余生活三个方面。注意点有a.词数100左右；b.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；c.开头语已为你写好.写作时要充分发挥想象，适当的添加自己的观点，使文章内容丰满，并达到要求的字数。此外为了提高文章档次，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇，并添加关联词让行文流畅。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了一整段的结构，开门见山，运用平常的词语却写的新颖，别致，内容丰富。让人产生联想，简单易懂，虽然不华丽，却很朴实。没有过多的空话。文章运用了一般现在时和将来时穿插。用了很多语法知识，运用了第一人陈为主的叙述顺序。