Question

7．假定你是李华．校学生会打算举办一个美国文化节，急需一些美国杂志．请你给美国笔友Jimmy写一封email求助，让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过来，并告知会承担相关费用．
内容包括：
1．求助的原因；
2．对杂志的要求；
3．费用．
注意：
1．词数80左右．
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Jimmy，
I'm writing to ask for a favor from you．To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture，the Student Union is organizing an American Culture Festival．（高分句型一）We're now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society．（高分句型二）So，could you please help select and buy some and send them to us？We will cover all the relevant costs．Also，we would appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students．（高分句型三）Thanks a lot!
Please reply at your earliest convenience!

Yours
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华．校学生会打算举办一个美国文化节，急需一些美国杂志．请你给美国笔友Jimmy写一封email求助，让他帮忙选购一些能反映美国社会、适合中国学生的杂志寄过来，并告知会承担相关费用．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：．求助的原因；对杂志的要求；费用．  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：ask for a favor寻求帮助； in urgent need of急需；see to 处理；are suitable for对…适合；at your earliest convenience在你方便的时候；
To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture，the Student Union is organizing an American Culture Festival．（高分句型一）
We're now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society．（高分句型二）
Also，we would appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jimmy，
      I'm writing to ask for a favor from you．To help us students gain a glimpse into American culture，the Student Union is organizing an American Culture Festival．（高分句型一）We're now in urgent need of some American popular magazines that can reflect modern American society．（高分句型二）So，could you please help select and buy some and send them to us？We will cover all the relevant costs．Also，we would appreciate it if you could see to it that the contents of the magazines are suitable for Chinese middle school students．（高分句型三）Thanks a lot!
      Please reply at your earliest convenience!
 
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours
                                                                                                                                                                                                     Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．