Question

1．假设你是某校高三学生李华．最近你校的英语校报举办了"感恩父母"的征文比赛．请你结合自己的实际，按照下列提示用英语写一篇短文参加比赛．
1．多年来父母对你的关爱（至少两个方面）；
2．最近一段时间你的表现；
3．你报答父母的打算（至少两个）．
注意：
1．词数120左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已给出，不计入总词数．
I'm always grateful to my parents．_____________________________________________
______________________________________________________________________________

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇列出写作要点的提纲类作文．内容包括：列举至少两反面这么多年父母的关爱；列举最近的表现；如何报答父母．时态为一般现在时，人称为第一人称．
高级词汇和高分句型：
keep sb company 陪伴
overcome difficulties 克服困难
appreciate 感激
be admitted into 被…录取
高分句型：
（一）They not only①gave me life，but also brought me up with selfless love and support，feeling so proud of my every tiny bit of progress．
not only…but also…不仅…而且…；
feeling so proud…现在分词做状语；
（二）．②Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate so much．
Furthermore 而且，表递进；
which 引导非限制性定语从句，指父母给我足够的个人空间这件事．

解答 I  am always grateful to my parents．①They not only gave me life，but also brought me up with selfless love and support，feeling so proud of my every tiny bit of progress，They always share my happiness and sorrow．Once，I still remember，I was seriously  ill and they were so worried and kept me company the whole night．Now I'm in Senior 3，and luckily for me，my parents can understand my stressful condition and often encourage me to overcome difficulties．②Furthermore，they give me enough personal space，which I appreciate so much．So I have been coping with both my studies and my life well recently．
  What I should do now is to keep on studying hard in order to be admitted into a famous university．When I become independent economically in the future，I will help my parent live a better life．

点评 本题为提纲类作文，难度不是太大．要求考生全面审题，抓住中心，列出要点，选择自己有把握熟悉的短语句型来表达，并能使用适当的连接词衔接文章．