题目内容
【题目】你校计划将下周日前往雕塑公园进行春季远足活动,假如你是班长李华,你校英国留学生Peter对此很感兴趣,请你用英文给他写一封信,并向他提出邀请。要点如下:
1.介绍此次活动的相关情况(如出游的时间,地点等)。
2.活动的意义及注意事项。
注意:1.词数100左右,信的开头和结尾已为你写好(不计入总次数);
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.参考词汇:雕塑公园:the Sculpture Park; 远足:hiking;
Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in hiking.______________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm glad to hear that you are interested in hiking.Our school intends to organize an outing for us students next Sunday.We will start from our school,walk along the Qingyijiang and finally reach our destination—the Sculpture Park.
It is an interesting and meaningful activity.When we are tired of working or studying,we can go to a beautiful place to enjoy the beauty of nature,breathe fresh air and relax ourselves.In addition,it also offers us a good chance to make new friends.
As we will do a lot of walking,you' better wear strong shoes.Secondly,make sure to take some
water and food with you for we will have a picnic at noon.
I sincerely hope that you can join us.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。要求你给Peter写一封信,介绍你校下周要举行的春季远足活动的相关情况(活动时间,地点,意义,注意事项等),并邀请Peter参加该活动。该写作内容比较贴接学生生活,内容简单易写。介绍活动情况时,适合用一般将来时态。
【亮点点评】所给作文范文内容齐全,条理清楚,表达简洁明了。文中用到“meaningful,be tired of”等较高级词汇。同时,in addition,secondly等词汇的使用使得文章条理更加清楚明确。