Question

 假设你是李华。时下,你校不少学生带手机上学。为此,你班组织了一次班会，讨论中学生上学是否有必要带手机。请你给英语笔友Tom写封信，根据下表提供的信息，客观地介绍讨论的情况。可结合你校实际进行适当发挥，并发表自己的看法。

一些同学认为	一些同学认为	你的观点
方便；时尚。	中学生自控能力差；玩手机浪费时间。	（请你实话实说）

注意：

1．     正确使用英文书信的基本格式。词数：120左右。

Dear Tom,                                                           

Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school. …                         

 

 

 

 

Yours truly,                                            

Li  Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Tom,

Recently we’ve had a class meeting to discuss whether it is necessary for middle school students to carry mobile phones to school.

Some of the students think that it is more convenient for them to keep in touch with their parents and friends if they have a mobile phone. And what’s more, it’s a fashion.

However, others think that middle school students are not old enough to control themselves. It is a waste of time for students to play games and send messages to each other by mobile phone. And it’s easy to cause the students to vie(攀比，竞争) with each other. If necessary, they can make phone calls by using public phones on the campus.

In my opinion, as middle school students we should put all of our heart into our studies though following the fashion is understandable. What do you think of it?

With best wishes,                               

Yours truly,

Li  Hua

【解析】

这篇作文是以写信的形式，注意其格式，认真审题，知道要点内容，把要点加以整理，用适当的句型进行概括；概括时可以主要用简单句，也可以适当用复杂句，但要确保复杂句使用正确；切记要点要全，不要遗漏；注意语法正确，单词拼写正确，字体干净。