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【题目】Chocolate has come a long way through history, and one of the reasons is the Ferrero family, the creators of the worldfamous Ferrero Rocher chocolate treats.The history of this family business starts back in the 1940s, when Pietro Ferrero and his wife, Piera, transformed a pastry shop into a factory.There, Pietro and his son, Michele, let their creativity lead them to form the building blocks of the company.Eventually, Michele took over the operation and set his sights on making the best products possible.

Michele's efforts paid off.He turned his father's creations into globally sold and consumed products.One of their most successful products, Nutella, had become a staple food in many homes.The third generation now runs the company.Michele's sons, Pietro and Giovanni worked side by side as managing directors for ten years until an accident resulting in Pietro' death.Still inspired by his family and their hard work and determination, Giovanni is guiding Ferrero into the future.

While staying true to the Ferrero motto of “work, create, and donate”， he is making sure his family's business is an example of success in the past, present, and future.

【写作内容】

1．以约30个词概括上文的主要内容。

2．以约120个词谈谈Ferrero及其家人成功制作巧克力对你的启迪，内容包括：

(1)描述人们创业的艰辛。

(2)分析人们创业成功的原因。

(3)Ferrero及其家人成功制作巧克力对你的启迪。

【写作要求】

1．作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子。

2．作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。

【评分标准】

内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。

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Answer 1

【答案】With three generations' efforts of the Ferrero family, Ferrero, a chocolate company, has developed into a worldfamous business from the pastry shop through their creativity, hard work and determination.

It's no easy job to start a business.You may not only suffer from hardships but also run across unexpected risks.You need to deal with all kinds of people and learn many new things through your work, especially when you are green hands in a new field.

What account for one's success in his work include determination and hard work.It also requires of him qualities like honesty, patience and bravery.

As for us students, we all have a dream of our future.After setting a goal of our life, we must devote ourselves to achieving it.No matter what difficulty we meet, just try our best to overcome it.Only in this way can we live our dreams.

【解析】试题分析：

本文要求写约30个词概括上文的主要内容。并以约120个词谈谈Ferrero及其家人成功制作巧克力对你的启迪，写作时作文中可以使用亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子，作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称。写作时注意时态、语态的合理运用，主次分明，详略得当，语言力求准确、简洁。根据情景的发展，按顺序安排好材料。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

【亮点说明】

本文内容符合要求，文中使用高级句子。It's no easy job to start a business.动词不定式做真正的主语；You may not only suffer from hardships but also run across unexpected risks.not only---but also用在句中；especially when you are green hands in a new field.when引导时间状语从句；What account for one's success in his work include determination and hard work句中使用what引导的主语从句；No matter what difficulty we meet, just try our best to overcome it. No matter what引导让步状语从句；Only in this way can we live our dreams.部分倒装堪称经典。