Question

5．假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack正在学习汉语，看了电视节目"中国诗词大会"（Chinese Poetry Conference）之后，非常喜欢中国诗词，因而询问你最喜欢的中国诗人及原因．请就此给他回一封电子邮件．
要点如下：1．你喜欢的诗人；    2．喜欢他的原因；    3．欢迎Jack来访．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结语已为你写好．
Dear Jack，
I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply．How are you getting along with your learning Chinese？I am glad to hear that you have also watched the Chinese Poetry Conference-a hot game shows that tests competitor'smemory and reciting of Chinese poetry．（高分句型一）I'm excited to learn Chinese poetryinterests you greatly．I am sure that you are eager to know who is my favorite Chinese poet．（高分句型二）Well，LiBai，a poet in Tang Dynasty is my favorite．I likehis poems best，which are full of imagination and wonderful description．（高分句型三）He stands out among all the Chinese poets．His works have been translated into many languages．By the way，welcome to China and you can experience Chinese cultures in person．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Jack正在学习汉语，看了电视节目"中国诗词大会"（Chinese Poetry Conference）之后，非常喜欢中国诗词，因而询问你最喜欢的中国诗人及原因．请就此给他回一封电子邮件．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：你喜欢的诗人； 喜欢他的原因；  欢迎Jack来访   2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：get along with 与…相处；事情进展；be eager to渴望做某事；be full of充满了；stand out杰出；By the way顺便说一下；
I am glad to hear that you have also watched the Chinese Poetry Conference-a hot game shows that tests competitor's memory and reciting of Chinese poetry．（高分句型一
I am sure that you are eager to know who is my favorite Chinese poet．（高分句型二）
I like his poems best，which are full of imagination and wonderful description．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jack，
      How are you getting along with your learning Chinese？I am glad to hear that you have also watched the Chinese Poetry Conference-a hot game shows that tests competitor's memory and reciting of Chinese poetry．（高分句型一）I'm excited to learn Chinese poetry interests you greatly．I am sure that you are eager to know who is my favorite Chinese poet．（高分句型二）Well，Li Bai，a poet in Tang Dynasty is my favorite．I like his poems best，which are full of imagination and wonderful description．（高分句型三）He stands out among all the Chinese poets．His works have been translated into many languages．By the way，welcome to China and you can experience Chinese cultures in person．
      I'm looking forward to receiving your early reply．
                                                                                                                                                                                          Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．