题目内容
【题目】假定你是李华, 你的好友张明邀请你参加他的 18 岁生日聚会, 你因故不能参加。请用英语给他 写一封电子邮件。内容包括:
●感谢邀请;
●表达祝愿;
●你不能参加的原因;
●你准备的礼物以及如何送给他;
注意:1. 词数 100 左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯;
3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好, 不计入总词数
Dear Zhang ming
How are you?
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Yours,
Li hua
【答案】Dear Zhang Ming,
How are you? Thanks so much for inviting me to your eighteenth birthday party. Happy birthday to you! I’d like to go, but I am afraid I can’t be present. I’m so sorry.
My mother had a fall yesterday evening and got hurt badly in her right leg. I have to look after her because my father is away on business. It is really a pity to miss your birthday party.
Here, I’d like to express my best wishes in advance. I have just bought a wallet for you, which I hope you would like. The present will be delivered to you by express and will get to you tomorrow.
Sorry again for my absence.
Yours,
Li hua
【解析】
这是一篇提纲类写作。
第1步:根据提示可知,假定你是李华, 你的好友张明邀请你参加他的 18 岁生日聚会, 你因故不能参加。请用英语给他 写一封电子邮件。内容包括:●感谢邀请;●表达祝愿;●你不能参加的原因;●你准备的礼物以及如何送给他;
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组):encouragement(鼓励);in front of (在……前面);fall in love with (爱上);the same (同样的);in the future (将来)等。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。此处文章主要应用一般过去时和一般现在时。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。