[题目]假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文.请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.文中共有10处语言错误.每句中最多有两处.每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加.删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧).并在其下面写出该加的词.删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.修改:在错的词下划一横线.并在该词下面写出修改后的词.注意:1. 每处错误及其修改均仅题目和参考答案——青夏教育精英家教网—

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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Ram,

Thank you for your concern about the construction of Hainan International Tourism Island.

On hearing the excited news, I almost jumped with joy. There is no doubt that they will have a great effect on the development of Hainan, especially Hainan’s tourism.Which we all know, Hainan Island is so beautiful that more and more people at home and abroad were attracted to enjoy its wonderful scenery.

Instead, more jobs will be offered to local people and they will lead a more better life. The government will also focus on the construction of transport, making it conveniently for people to travel around. The environmental protections is another concern. I am sure we will make Hainan Island ideal place for tourism. Ram, welcome to our hometown to experiencing our unique scenery and culture.

Best wishes to you!

Yours,

Li Hua

【答案】1.excited→exciting 2.they→it 3. Which→As 4.were→are

5.Instead→Besides /Meanwhile 6. 去掉more或more→much

7.conveniently→convenient 8.protections→protection

9. ideal 前加an

10. experiencing→experience

【解析】

本文是应用文，给朋友Ram的一封信，告知他关于作者家乡的海南国际旅游岛的建设的情况。

1.考查形容词。excited意为“（人）感到兴奋的，感到激动的”，修饰人；exciting意为“（某事）令人兴奋的，令人激动的”，修饰事/物；此处是修饰news，指物，意为“令人激动的消息”，故excited改为exciting。

2.考查代词。此处they应该指代上一句提到的the construction of Hainan International Tourism Island，construction是不可数名词，应用it指代。故they改为it。

3.考查定语从句。固定短语as we all know“众所周知”；as引导定语从句，意为“正如，就像”可置于句首，而which引导非限制性定语从句一般不置于句首。故Which改为As。

4.考查时态。根据上一句Hainan Island is so beautiful的时态，句子叙述的是客观事实，应用一般现在时，故were改为are。

5.考查副词。上文提到“海南国际旅游岛能吸引游客”，下一句提到“还能给当地人提供更多的工作机会”，两个句子之间是递进关系；instead意为“相反，而不是”，表示转折关系；应用besides意为“而且，除此之外”，表示递进关系；也可用meanwhile意为“与此同时”，表示并列关系。故Instead改为Besides/Meanwhile。

6.考查形容词比较等级。better是形容词比较级，原级good是单音节词，前面没必要加more；也可以将more改为much，“much+比较级”意为“…得多”。故去掉more或more改为much。

7.考查形容词。句意：政府还将专注于交通建设，使人们出行更加方便。此处为“make+ it+形容词作宾语补足语” 结构，故conveniently改为convenient。

8.考查名词单复数。protection是不可数名词，不用复数形式，故protections改为protection。

9.考查冠词。句意：我相信我们会使海南岛成为旅游的理想之地。此处不定冠词an表示数量，意为“一个”；ideal的发音是以元音音素开头，因此用不定冠词an。故ideal 前加an。

10.考查非谓语动词。句意：欢迎到我们的家乡来体验我们独特的风景和文化。此处动词不定式做目的状语，后接动词原形。故experiencing改为experience。

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Before taking on the tracks, Brittany meets with each dog and his or her owner to get a sense of the pet’s character. Then she schedules a meet-and-greet with other dogs that will join the hike to be sure to match their personalities. Each hiking is about two hours long and includes transportation to and from the track for around $70 per outing. “Hiking allows dogs lo meet new friends and explore new tracks, smells, and wildlife,” she explains.

Michael Mizenko thinks sending his pet, Ajax, on weekly hikes with Take a Hike has made Ajax a happier dog. Over the past two years, hiking has taught Ajax how to stay off pavement, be more social and remain calm in the car. “It has made him a flexible easygoing guy.” Michael says.

【1】Why has pet hiking been popular in these days?

A.Dogs strongly desire their owners to go hiking.

B.Animal health specialists recommend people to do it.

C.It is beneficial for pets’ shape and health.

D.The owner’s house is not big enough for dogs.

【2】What is the second paragraph mainly talking about?

A.Why Brittany founded Take a Hike.

B.How hard the study life of Brittany was.

C.Take a Hike is very popular in the neighborhood.

D.Dog hiking has brought great enjoyment to Brittany.

【3】What does Brittany want to make sure before taking her customers’ dogs to go hiking?

A.The distance of the track.

B.The character of each dog.

C.The environment of the track.

D.The emotions of both dogs and their owners.

【4】How often does Michael Mizenko send his pet to hike with Take a Hike?

A.Every day.B.Once a week.

C.Twice a week.D.Every other week.

【题目】 Jazz guitarist Joel Harrison came of age in 1960s and 70s' Washington, but he never saw it as a place to build a career as an adventurous, progressive musician. Everywhere he's gone, however, he's taken the sounds of the city with him.

'Growing up in that area allowed me access to a lot of different kinds of music,' says Harrison, 61, who's now based in New York after living in Boston and San Francisco. 'Southern music traditions-old-time music, bluegrass, country as well as jazz and R&B.'

All of those appear to some degree in Free Country, a project Harrison began in 2003 as a means of filtering (渗透) country and bluegrass compositions through a up-to-date jazz sound and sensibility. On his new album, 'Angel Band: Free Country Vol.3, 'Harrison, on guitar and vocals (演唱), and his band take on many traditional bluegrass songs. Each cut is really kind of its own, distinct sound world. Since Harrison released the first two Free Country albums, he has produced 14 other albums. The Free Country releases, though, have been his most successful, and established his reputation.

In particular, Harrison drew inspiration from Danny Gatton, a D.C. guitar hero who similarly combines the local musical currents. Harrison was a self-described adorer of Gatton, going to attend his countless performances.

Harrison is also a composer. His work, rooted in progressive Jazz but exploring multiple types, is often through-composed and highly complex. He received a Guggenheim scholarship in2010 to compose and record an, eight-movement piece. The tunes he plays with Free Country are simpler, based on conventions of folk and pop music — which, for Harrison, is a large part of their appeal.

The music that he's covering timeless, and he aims to find endless currency in its timeless simplicity by maintaining me soul of the compositions and also adding a modern context and a modem language to it.

【1】What exposed Harrison to various music?

A.His growth environment.

B.His current place of residence.

C.His family background.

D.Touring the country.

【2】What do we know about Joel Harrison?

A.He has released 14 albums in total so far.

B.He showed a new jazz style in Free Country.

C.He earned large profits by releasing Free Country.

D.He was inspired to hold many performances by Gatton.

【3】What's Harrison's goal of creating music?

A.To put modern elements into the languages.

B.To develop different styles based on previous jazz.

C.To compose more pieces and release more albums.

D.To seek great popularity in its permanent simplicity.

【题目】增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（╲）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

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【题目】Every year, __________ makes the most beautiful kite will win a prize in the Kite Festival.

A.whoeverB.whomeverC.no matter whoD.no matter whom

【题目】请阅读下面短文，并按照要求用英语写一篇150词左右的文章。

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Teens want to be different from their parents, so it’s natural for them to create and use their own linguistic terms to show that. In doing so, young people are indeed driving linguistic change. They aren’t the only factor influencing language development, but they can indeed transform how future generations communicate.

Critics fear that Chinese internet slang will have the potential to negatively influence broader linguistic trends of Mandarin Chinese, in particular, the gradual taking over of pinyin. As pinyin gets widely used when texting or writing on mobile phone or computer, while less and less people write characters by hand, people gradually forget how to write them. The phenomenon has got a name in China: Character amnesia(健忘症).

（写作内容）

1. 用约30个单词概述上文年轻人使用网络语言的现象；

2. 用约120个单词发表你的观点，内容包括:谈谈你的看法，用23个理由或论据支撑你的看法。

（写作要求）

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句；

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；

3. 不必写标题。

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After that, I developed an awareness of staying away from instant noodles and eat healthy food.

【题目】 I will never forget the darkness, the pain and strong desire to die.

November arrived grey and busy, and going into an even more stressful. December, I was filled with anxious thoughts.

A visit to my father’s grave is often a good chance to cry and when I leave I feel a little more at peace. But this time was different. I drove home and every night for the rest of that week, I cried.

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The thanks I received later from the neighbors made me light up. It felt so good, and it distracted me from my dark thoughts.

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【1】After she started sharing cookies with neighbors, the author_________.

A.gained trust and care from them

B.added other things to her delivery list

C.felt her life was no longer busy or stressful

D.found some of them had more mental problems than her

【2】What is the author’s attitude toward her future life?

A.Positive.B.Cautious.C.Doubtful.D.Concerned.

【3】What is the main purpose of this passage?

A.To express gratitude to caring neighbors.

B.To speak of the benefits of baking cookies at home.

C.To share how being kind helped her regain hope.

D.To show the importance of a closely connected community.

【题目】 New Mexico has announced a plan to make public colleges and universities free for all people in the state, a Proposal considered one of the most ambitious attempts in education these years.

The plan, if approved, would allow students, regardless of household income, to attend any of the 29 states public colleges and universities. State officials estimate that the program, officially called the New Mexico Opportunity Scholarship, will help 55,000 students each year attend college.

Calling the plan “the moonshot for higher education,” New Mexico Gov. Michelle LujanGrisham announced it on Wednesday at the New Mexico Higher Education Summit in Albuquerque. “It means better enrollment (注册). It means better students' success. In the long run, it means economic growth, improved outcomes for New Mexico workers and thinkers and parents,” Lujan Grisham said, “It means a better trained workforce.”

Twenty other states have set up tuition free education programs for two-year community colleges. And New York created a scholarship program to allow students to go to public colleges and universities without paying tuition. But there are household income requirements and other rules, including that receivers live and work in New York for several years after graduating. The New Mexico proposal has no such restrictions. And some experts wonder if the lack of program regulations is one of its disadvantages.

Wil Del Pilar, the vice president for higher education at The Education Trust, said there is a risk that wealthier students will benefit the most in the program, since there are no income requirements. “When you have limited state dollars, I would argue that we should target those dollars toward those who struggle the most to pay,” Del Pilar told NPR.

Like the New York s scholarship program, New Mexico's covers just tuition, not other living costs. To Del Pilar that is a problem. He said the promise of free college takes more than eliminating (取消) tuition. Paying for housing, meals, books and transportation are still challenges for many low-income students, he said.

【1】What's the purpose of the New Mexico plan?

A.To reform the system of education.

B.To improve the quality of education.

C.To attract more students around the world.

D.To make higher education more accessible.

【2】What was Lujan Grisham’s attitude towards the New Mexico plan?

A.A little doubtful.B.A little confused.

C.Full of curiosity.D.Full of confidence.

【3】Compared with the New Mexico plan, the New York program .

A.has fewer restrictionsB.benefits more students

C.has more requirementsD.covers more living costs

【4】What is the problem with the New Mexico plan according to Del Pilar?

A.It is limited to tuition.B.It doesn't include tuition.

C.It opens to all college students.D.It's only available to poor students.

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