Question

14．中国的传统节日春节就要到了．假如你是李华，请根据以下要点提示，给你的外教Mr Blake写一封电子邮件，邀请他及他的家人到你家共度除夕．
（1）提出邀请；
（2）简单介绍春节；
（3）表达新春的祝愿．
注意：
（1）词数100左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头语已为你写好．
Dear Mr Black，
It is my pleasure to invite you and your family to my home for Chinese New Year．I bet our wonderful welcome will surprise you．
The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year，which is usually in February．There is a name for each year，such as the dog，the monkey，the tiger or one of the twelve animals，and this year is the year of the pig．On the last evening of the old year，all the members of a family will get together and have a big meal．On the first or second day of the new year，people usually go to visit their relatives and friends and give some lucky money to children．
I wish you have a good time during the Spring Festival．
Yours，
Lihua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们写一封电子邮件，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第一人称，时态主要是一般现在时，内容要点包括：提出邀请；简单介绍春节；表达新春的祝愿．我们此篇作文分为三部分，第一部分向Mr Black 提出邀请．第二部分为简单介绍春节．第三部分为新春的祝愿．
重点短语与句型：
invite sb to do sth 邀请某人做某事
Spring Festival  春节
get together聚会
have a good time 玩的开心
高分句型一：It is my pleasure to invite you and your family to my home for Chinese New Year．此句用了it is one's pleasure to do sth…某人很乐意做某事
高分句型二：The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year，which is usually in February．此句用了非限制性定语从句

解答 Dear Mr Black，
It is my pleasure to invite you and your family  to my home for Chinese New Year．（高分句型一）I bet our wonderful welcome will surprise you．（向Mr Black 提出邀请）
The Chinese Spring Festival comes on the first day of the Chinese Lunar Year，which is usually in February．（高分句型二）There is a name for each year，such as the dog，the monkey，the tiger or one of the twelve animals，and this year is the year of the pig．On the last evening of the old year，all the members of a family will get together and have a big meal．On the first or second day of the new year，people usually go to visit their relatives and friends and give some lucky money to children（．简单介绍春节）
I wish you have a good time during the Spring Festival．（新春的祝愿）
Yours，
Lihua

点评 第一步：审题，确定体裁格式、主体时态、中心人称和内容要点，避免填表式或履历表式表达．
第二步：拟定提纲，创造良好的开端；叙述得体，布局谋篇；巧妙过渡，完美结尾．
第三步：遣词造句，上下衔接，地道表达，行文成篇（注意"参考词汇"的提示作用）．