题目内容
假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件:
1.礼物选择
2.你的理由
3.其他和解建议
注意:
1.词数100左右
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter.
LiHua
Dear Tom,
I’m glad to hear that you are considering making up with Peter. If I were you, I would consider a bike as a birthday present for him.
As far as I know, Peter is always in poor health so he can take more exercise by riding a bike to build up his body. In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship. Besides, taking a bike is an environmentally-friendly means of transport. It’s convenient for him to get around as well.
Apart from giving him a gift, you can also adopt other means, such as travelling, seeing a movie, having dinner and going shopping. No matter what you do, being sincere is the most important. I really hope that we can be good friends forever.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:这是一篇提纲类作文。假如你是李华。你的两位朋友Tom与Peter几天前发生了争吵。3月9日是Peter生日,Tom想送他一个礼物来缓和关系,修复友情,特地发来邮件寻求你的建议。请你根据以下要点给Tom回一封邮件:1.礼物选择2.你的理由3.其他和解建议。需要写的内容已经粗略给出,需要我们翻译成完整通顺的句子,适当添加些内容,使文章更充实。写作时注意准确运用时态,上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系,不能出现文章脱节问题。一定要给出自己的看法。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式,同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意要求的词数100词左右,不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点说明】In the meanwhile, you can often go outing by bike together, which is helpful to rebuild your friendship.这里含有一个定语从句;I really hope that we can be good friends forever.这里含有一个宾语从句。
考点:提纲类书面表达