Question

18．假定你是李华，你在某英文网站看到一个关于"Food & Culture"的征文活动．请根据下表内容提示写一篇短文．

中国饺子与文化
历史	大约1，500年
文化习俗	新年食物，家庭团聚，好运象征
做法	蒸、煎、煮等

注意：
1．词数120左右，题目已为你写好；
2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Chinese Dumplings and Culture．
Chinese dumplings or jiaozi，mainly with meat and vegetable fillings，is a traditional Chinese food，which dates back to about 1，500 years ago．（高分句型一）China has been perfecting the art of dumpling making since the Ming Dynasty．
As the Spring Festival marks the start of a new year，people choose to eat jiaozi to express their wishes for good fortune，so it is part of the Chinese culture．（高分句型二）Traditionally，family members get together to make dumplings on New Year's Eve．Making dumplings is really teamwork to create harmonious family atmosphere．Ways of cooking Chinese dumplings vary from place to place．Generally，they are steamed，boiled or pan-fried．Some are served dry with vinegar while others in soup．
As for details of Chinese dumplings and culture，it's well worth exploring．（高分句型三）．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你在某英文网站看到一个关于"Food & Culture"的征文活动．请根据下表内容提示写一篇短文．写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：中国饺子的历史、习俗和做法    2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：date back to追溯到；Traditionally传统上；Generally一般来说；As for 至于，关于；be worth doing值得
  Chinese dumplings or jiaozi，mainly with meat and vegetable fillings，is a traditional Chinese food，which dates back to about 1，500 years ago．（高分句型一）
As the Spring Festival marks the start of a new year，people choose to eat jiaozi to express their wishes for good fortune，so it is part of the Chinese culture．（高分句型二）
As for details of Chinese dumplings and culture，it's well worth exploring．（高分句型三）

解答 Chinese Dumplings and Culture
      Chinese dumplings or jiaozi，mainly with meat and vegetable fillings，is a traditional Chinese food，which dates back to about 1，500 years ago．（高分句型一）China has been perfecting the art of dumpling making since the Ming Dynasty．
       As the Spring Festival marks the start of a new year，people choose to eat jiaozi to express their wishes for good fortune，so it is part of the Chinese culture．（高分句型二）Traditionally，family members get together to make dumplings on New Year's Eve．Making dumplings is really teamwork to create harmonious family atmosphere．Ways of cooking Chinese dumplings vary from place to place．Generally，they are steamed，boiled or pan-fried．Some are served dry with vinegar while others in soup．
       As for details of Chinese dumplings and culture，it's well worth exploring．（高分句型三）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．