Question

6．某英语报社开展以"Parents and Children"为题的看图作文征文活动，要求根据以下图画用英语写一篇作文，文章的内容应包括：①11月15日发生在李华家的事情；②你个人的感受．请你写一篇向报社投稿的征文．注意：1．词数120左右，征文题目已给出，不计入总数；2．短文要求观点明确，结构合理，紧凑连贯．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇图画类写作，要求我们仔细看图，根据题目要求写成自己的作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：11月15日发生在李华家的事情；作者的感受．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为11月15日发生在李华家的事情．第二部分为作者的感受．
重点短语与句型：
be occupied in 忙于
prepare for  准备
How come？怎么会呢？
from the bottom of heart从心底
高分句型一：Li Hua thought to himself，feeling ashamed此句用了现在分词feeling作伴随状语
高分句型二：However busy we may be，we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them，and we should return them the same selfless love from the bottom of our heart．此句用了 However引导让步状语从句

解答 Parents and Children
On the evening of November 15th，Li Hua was watching TV while his mother was occupied in  preparing for dinner in the kitchen．How attentive he was watching the TV program when the telephone rang．It was from his grandmother，who wanted to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY to his mother．"Today is my mother's birthday？"Li Hua was a little puzzle．"How come that I have forgotten all about it？"Li Hua thought to himself，feeling ashamed．（高分句型一）（ 11月15日发生在李华家的事情）
At the story，I got deeply shocked．It is not easy for parents to bring us up．It is our parents who give us lots of love as well as much care，while we don't care for them enough．Now it's never too late to realize this and show our love and care for them．However busy we may be，we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them，and we should return them the same selfless love from the bottom of our heart．（高分句型二） （作者的感受）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．