Question

 假设你是李华，最近国内一家英文报纸正在讨论北京动物园是否应迁出市区。以下是你所在班级讨论的情况。请你给该报写一封信，反映讨论结果。

赞成迁出：	反对迁出：
1．游客多，交通堵塞 2．郊区环境好	1．建于1906年，中外闻名 2．搬迁易造成动物死亡

    注意：1．词数100字左右，信的开头已为你写好。

          2．可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

          3．参考词汇： 郊区—suburb

June 3 ,2005

Dear Editor,

    Recently, our class  have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city.

                                                                              

                                                                             

*四、说明

    *1．内容要点可用不同方式表达。

    *2．对紧扣主题的适当发挥不予扣分。

 

Answer 1

【答案】

 

Dear Editor ,

    Recently ,our class have had a heated discussion about whether the Beijing Zoo should be moved out of the city . Some of my classmates are in favor of the move .They say large crowds of tourists to the zoo will result in traffic jams .They also say that once moved ,animals will have more space and better living conditions in the suburbs .However ,other students are against the idea ,saying that the Beijing Zoo, built in 1906 ,has a history of 100 years ,and is well –known at home and abroad .So it should remain where it is .What’s more ,moving may cause the death of some animals .To move or not ,this is a big decision which has to be made by people in Beijing.

                                                         Yours truly,

                                                       Li Hua

【详解】出题新颖，紧扣生活实际，切实体现了英语服务工作，生活的工具性。具体写作具有扩展性，考生可以紧扣主题自由发挥。

【备考建议】作文作为英语考试分值较大的题型，尤其在当前英语考试纷纷施行网上阅卷的大背景下，考生作文备考要做好几个方面：一. 平时要注意英语句型短语的积累，英文中注意运用短语句型。二. 句子之间的衔接要自然，句式多样性。三. 卷面一定要整洁。总之，作文水平的提高不是一蹴而就的，要依靠平时的不断积累。