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17．假定你是李华，你校国际部下周将在学校报告厅（auditorium）举办中华诗词大会（Chinese Poetry Conference）的国际学生专场，届时将比赛背诵古诗、回答问题、根据图画猜诗词．请根据下列要点给你的美国朋友、留学生Peter写一封信，邀请他参加．
内容要点如下：
1．比赛的时间和地点；
2．比赛的目的和形式；
3．诚挚邀请Peter参赛．
要求：1．字数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear Peter，
I'm glad to tell you that the international department of our school is to hold a Chinese Poetry Conference for international students next week．（高分句型一）
It is aimed to arouse foreign students interest in Chinese culture and popularize Chinese poetry．The competition consist of three sections-reciting poems，answering questions about Chinese poetry and making right guesses of the poems according to the given paintings．（高分句型二）
This is a good chance to show how much you have learned about Chinese poetry and also a good opportunity to learn more．（高分句型三）I would be looking forward to your participation with great pleasure．
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，你校国际部下周将在学校报告厅（auditorium）举办中华诗词大会（Chinese Poetry Conference）的国际学生专场，届时将比赛背诵古诗、回答问题、根据图画猜诗词．请根据下列要点给你的美国朋友、留学生Peter写一封信，邀请他参加，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：比赛的时间和地点；比赛的目的和形式；诚挚邀请Peter参赛  2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be aimed to目的是；consist of 由…组成；according to根据；look forward to盼望；
I'm glad to tell you that the international department of our school is to hold a Chinese Poetry Conference for international students next week．（高分句型一）
The competition consist of three sections-reciting poems，answering questions about Chinese poetry and making right guesses of the poems according to the given paintings．（高分句型二）
This is a good chance to show how much you have learned about Chinese poetry and also a good opportunity to learn more．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Peter，
      I'm glad to tell you that the international department of our school is to hold a Chinese Poetry Conference for international students next week．（高分句型一）
      It is aimed to arouse foreign students interest in Chinese culture and popularize Chinese poetry．The competition consist of three sections-reciting poems，answering questions about Chinese poetry and making right guesses of the poems according to the given paintings．（高分句型二）
      This is a good chance to show how much you have learned about Chinese poetry and also a good opportunity to learn more．（高分句型三）I would be looking forward to your participation with great pleasure．
                                                                                                                                                                                         Yours sincerely，
                                                                                                                                                                                                 Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．