题目内容
5.《百万英镑》是马克•吐温的代表作之一,深受全世界青少年读者的喜爱.它以幽默讽刺的语言向我们讲述了一个美国穷小子亨利•亚当斯在伦敦的奇遇.假设老师让你在英语课上为同学们介绍小说《百万英镑》.请你根据以上内容,写一篇100次左右的讲稿.内容要求:小说名、作者、故事梗概、语言风格以及人们对这本书的评价.
参考词汇:奇遇 fortuitous adventure 讽刺的 sarcastic
TodayIam going to introduce to you a novel. .
This is a brief introduction to the story.Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.
分析 提纲作文为本题主要考查点.本文要求考生按照文字提示写一篇讲稿,介绍马克•吐温的小说《百万英镑》.要使用第三人称和一般过去时为主的时态.要点:《百万英镑》是马克•吐温的代表作之一,深受全世界青少年读者的喜爱.它以幽默讽刺的语言向我们讲述了一个美国穷小子亨利•亚当斯在伦敦的奇遇.学生应该较为熟悉该篇小说,在写作的时候可以添加有小说有关的适当内容,在文章最后部分添加个人对这本小说的评价和感受.在写作的时候主要演讲稿的过渡串联词.
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本文很好的完成了文字提示部分的所有任务,包含了所有的要点,美中不足的是在最后并未添加个人感受.范文语言流畅地道,没有中国式英语的思维.时态和人称的运用准确无误,转换自然合理.作者在文章中使用了较多的高级句式,如分词做定语This novel is called"The Million Pound Banknote"written by Mark Twain.宾语从句wanted to see what would become of him a month later…;另外文章中高级词汇及短语使用较多,如become of、a brief introduction等等.这些写作技巧的运用很好地增加了文章的文采.
解答 Today,I am going to introduce to you a novel.
This novel is called"The Million Pound Banknote"written by Mark Twain.(高分句型一)Through humorous and sarcastic language,Mark Twain successfully described a fortuitous adventure of Henry Adams,a poor American lad in London.Two rich men in London had a bet on him and wanted to see what would become of him a month later if they gave him a million pound banknote which couldn't be cashed.(高分句型二)A month later,Henry wasn't starved nor arrested,but became a millionaire.What's more,he even won the love of a pretty lady.
The novel is considered as one of the famous works of Mark Twain,which is very popular with teenagers throughout the world.(高分句型三)This is a brief introduction to the story.Hope you will enjoy reading this representative work of Mark Twain.
点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题.它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力.在撰写时要注意主谓语一致,时态呼应,用词贴切等.要提高英语写作水平,需要两方面的训练:一是语言基础方面的训练,要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功,即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子;二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧.
Shoppers,traders and businessmen in Red Lion Street were(41)D by a loud bang,and seconds later two men were seen to(42)C out of the van,which had stopped outside Barclays Bank.Several people rushed to give(43)D and helped to put out the fire(44)A the van.
The two men,Mr.Cary House,who was driving,and Mr.Charlie Lynn,in his(45)B seat,were taken to hospital with (a/an) slight(46)C.They were allowed to leave after simple (47)B.
"I heard this explosion.It was(48)B loud.I thought it could have been a(n) (49)A."said Mr.Leslie Webster,manager of the market,who was working in his (50)B in Red Lion Street."I looked out of the window and saw a lad (小伙子) jump out of the van and(51)C on the ground to put out the fire on his clothes.Then a second lad came out of the van.He seemed to be in a (52)D state--parts of his trousers were burning."
"I came downstairs to get a fire extinguisher (灭火器),but(53)D the time I got outside,someone from the bank had already been at the(54)A with an extinguisher."said Mr.Leslie Webster.
Mr.Webster said both men were shocked.Then he helped to take one into his market's office to wait for a(n) (55)D."The second man(56)B going back into the van to see if everything was(57)C,and five minutes later he came out with a drawer that was burning."he added.
(58)C inside the van was not heavy,only superficial (表面的),(59)A a plastic window was blown out.
The two friends have spent the last six months(60)A.At the time of the incident their wives were shopping happily in the city.
41.A.disappointed | B.excited | C.satisfied | D.shocked |
42.A.fly | B.drop | C.jump | D.fall |
43.A.food | B.warning | C.report | D.assistance |
44.A.inside | B.outside | C.around | D.towards |
45.A.teacher | B.passenger | C.son | D.student |
46.A.fever | B.sickness | C.burns | D.cold |
47.A.test | B.treatment | C.recovery | D.examination |
48.A.a little | B.pretty | C.usually | D.not a bit |
49.A.bomb | B.fire | C.truck | D.accident |
50.A.car | B.office | C.clinic | D.hospital |
51.A.lie | B.die | C.roll | D.fall |
52.A.good | B.poor | C.easier | D.worse |
53.A.at | B.for | C.after | D.by |
54.A.van | B.office | C.market | D.room |
55.A.driver | B.waiter | C.firefighter | D.ambulance (救护车) |
56.A.kept on | B.insisted on | C.cared for | D.gave up |
57.A.in order | B.in all | C.all right | D.all over |
58.A.Equipment | B.Suffering | C.Damage | D.Smoke |
59.A.although | B.since | C.because | D.so that |
60.A.travelling | B.repairing | C.selling | D.cleaning. |