题目内容
【题目】假设你是李华。英语口语课上,老师要求大家各自描述一下自己想象中的大学生活。请结合以下同学的观点,写一篇100词左右的英语短文谈谈你对大学生活的认识。
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【答案】College life will be one of the most important stages in my life. I think my life in college will be more colorful and interesting than it is now. I can have free time to take part in some interesting clubs and activities, such as sports and theatre activities. Of course, there are maths clubs and science clubs as well. I may have many classmates from all over the country. I will have new friendships with them. Surely, managing my major subjects will be my main goal in my college life. Meanwhile, I want to take some online classes to increase my knowledge and broaden my horizons.
I will plan my college life based on what I hope to do after graduation. I believe that my college life will be interesting and meaningful.
【解析】
本篇书面表达属于话题类作文。
第1步:根据提示可知,文章要求假设你是李华。英语口语课上,老师要求大家各自描述一下自己想象中的大学生活。请结合以下同学的观点,写一篇100词左右的英语短文谈谈你对大学生活的认识。时态应为一般将来时。
第2步:根据写作要求,确定关键词(组),如:stage阶段,colorful多彩的,take part in参加,such as例如,as well也,friendship友谊,main goal主要的目标,Meanwhile同时,online classes网上课程,broaden one’s horizons拓宽某人的视野,based on以…为基础。
第3步:根据提示及关键词(组)进行遣词造句,注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第4步:连句成文,注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡,书写一定要规范清晰,保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。
亮点说明:作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式,如:I think my life in college will be more colorful and interesting than it is now.宾语从句的运用;I believe that my college life will be interesting and meaningful. 宾语从句的运用。本文内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。另外全文中没有中国式英语的句式,显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外,文章思路清晰、层次分明,上下句转换自然,为文章增色添彩。