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14．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处．每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词．                                     
删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．                                                              
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．
One afternoon，I was wandering on the street when I saw my brother by the chance．He was behaving very strange．He looked around before going quickly into a shop．When he came down，he had a box in his hand．I knew some villagers turned to steal because they were poor．The thought whether my brother could be one of them drove me crazily．I was determined to find out the truth．When he questioned，tears filled his eyes．He said he was collecting beer bottle from kind shopkeepers，but would feel embarrassing if he was seen by others．I was very sorry that I have misunderstood my brother．

分析 本文主要讲述作者看到弟弟举止怪异，看到他从商店里拿着一个盒子出来，以为他是小偷．当得知真相后，作者对误解弟弟表示歉意．

解答 One afternoon，I was wandering on the street when I saw my brother by the chance．He was behaving very strange．He looked around before going quickly into a shop．When he came down，he had a box in his hand．I knew some villagers turned to steal because they were poor．The thought whether my brother could be one of them drove me crazily．I was determined to find out the truth．When he∧questioned，tears filled his eyes．He said he was collecting beer bottle from kind shopkeepers，but would feel embarrassing if he was seen by others．I was very sorry that I have misunderstood my brother．
详解：
1．去掉the 考查固定搭配．by chance意为"偶然地，意外地"，是固定搭配．
2．strange改为strangely 考查副词．behave是动词，用副词修饰．
3．down改为out 考查词语用法．come down意为"下来，下落"，come out意为"出来"，此处应是后者．
4．steal改为stealing 考查动名词．to是介词，后接动词时用动名词形式．
5．whether改为that 考查连词．同位语从句my brother could be one of them是完整的，用连词that引导．
6．crazily改为crazy 考查形容词．drive+n．/pron．+adj．是driver的一个句式，adj．是形容词用宾语补足语．
7．加was 考查动词语态．he与question之间是动宾关系，用被动语态，因事情发生在过去，用一般过去时的被动语态．
8．bottle改为bottles 考查名词复数．bottle是可数名词，此处用复数表示种类．
9．embarrassing改为embarrassed 考查过去分词．过去分词作表语，多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化，其主语多半是人．
10．have改为had 考查动词时态．misunderstood发生在表示歉意之前，要用过去完成时态．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．

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