Question

【题目】为了了解目前高中阶段师生关系的现状，某知名英文报社推出“师生关系大家谈”栏目。假设你是高二学生李华，请用英文给该栏目写一篇短文。

包括以下要点：

1. 你校的师生关系现状；

2. 你个人与老师的关系；

3. 你对良好师生关系的看法。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Answer 1

【答案】

In general, the teachers and students are on good terms in our school. We respect each other.

As for me, an out-going person, I’m quite willing to share my thoughts with my teachers. Whenever I have any difficulty, I like to turn to my teachers, and they always show love and concern for me and give me strong support and good advice.

In my opinion, teachers and students should enjoy an equal relationship. That is to say, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers. Thus we could exchange ideas freely and both teachers and students will benefit from such a warm relationship.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是提纲类作文，要点已给出。写作时可结合自身实际情况书写，同时要把所提示的点写全，语句通顺，同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词，同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。

【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语短文，内容齐全，层次分明，结构严谨，布局合理，采用三段式，使用高级句子。Whenever I have any difficulty, I like to turn to my teachers, Whenever引导时间状语从句；That is to say, teachers should become friends of students while students ought to place more trust in their teachers. while在此引导并列句，让前后形成鲜明对比；另外，In general, As for me, That is to say, Thus为文章增色添彩。