Question

【题目】假设你是李华，你校外教Mr. Brown春节期间看到邻居房门上的福字是倒贴的，感到很好奇。写信向你询问此事。请给他回一封信，介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他在高考后来你家过端午节。

注意1.词数120左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

参考词汇：福字 the character Fu 高考：the College Entrance Exam

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Brown,

I’m really glad to receive your letter. As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring Festival. This actually expresses their best wishes for the new year. In Chinese, the character for “upside down” sounds the same as the character “to arrive” so this means that happiness is arriving. Quite interesting, isn’t it?

By the way, I’d like to invite you to celebrate the Dragon Boat Festival with my family after the College Entrance Exam. It’s a day in memory of the great poet Qu Yuan and we usually eat Zongzi and enjoy dragon boat races. It’ll be a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture and tradition.

Look forward to your reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】名师解析：本题是提纲类作文，文体是说明文。话题是向你的外教Mr. Brown介绍福字倒贴的原因和这一传统的寓意，同时邀请他在高考后来你家过端午节。写作要点要全面包括，不能有遗漏和省略。同时注意谋篇布局的顺序，运用合适的连接词连接全文，同时可以选择高级的词汇和语法项目，让文章更有文采。审题时注意本文使用一般现在时，描述要尽量选择简洁的语言，运用合适的语法规则和词汇把各要点都准确表述出。难点在于选择词汇和句型，可以灵活运用高级词汇和固定短语准确表述。

亮点分析： 文中使用了由as 引导的非限制性定语从句As you have seen, many Chinese choose to stick the character Fu on the door upside down during the Spring。运用了that引导的宾语从句this means that happiness is arriving。及反意疑问句： Quite interesting, isn’t it?。

运用了由it作形式主语的句子:It’ll be a good opportunity to experience Chinese culture and tradition. 同时还运用了一些较高级的词汇如the same as，by the way,，in memory of，look forward to…

总之，本篇文章要点齐全，结构完整。能运用多种句式，同时还运用了许多短语，让文章更有层次感，增添了文章的可读性。