Question

I have a good friend who's name is Liu Mei．She is our

monitor and one of the excellent students in our class．

Clever as she is, but she works very hard．We have a

lot on common and have a lot to talk about．One evening she

told me that something happened when her parents was out．

She was doing her homeworks one Sunday morning when

she smelt something burning．She stopped look out

of the window and find a cloud of smoke coming out

of her neighbor's house．She called 119 immediate．Ten

minutes later, the firemen came and put out fire．Her neighbor

was very thankful for her help．

Answer 1

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解析：

1．Who's改为 whose; 2．√;3．去掉but; 4．on改为In; 5．was改为 were; 6．homeworks改为 homework; 7．stopped后加 to; 8．find改为 found; 9．immediate改为immediately; 10．out后加 the