题目内容
【题目】澳大利亚风景优美,空气清新, 野生动物多样。假如你是李华,计划在寒假期间与父母前往澳大利亚旅游。请给你的笔友Tom写封e-mail, 询问以下旅游事宜:
1)著名景点;
2) 特色食品;
3)特别注意事项;
4) 推荐一些旅馆和餐馆。
注意:1) 要涵盖所给要点,词数100左右
2) 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯
3) 开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How is everything going recently?……
Best regards
Li Hua
【答案】Dear Tom,
How is everything going recently? I have longed to visit your country, an amazing land with beautiful scenery, fresh air and colorful wildlife. My dream will come true in the coming winter vacation. Now I'm writing to ask for some information.
First,please tell me what places of interest we can pay a visit to while in Australia. Besides, I am interested in the local food there. Would you please introduce some typical food to us? Also, I'd like to know if there is anything special that we should be aware of. At last, would you please recommend some good hotels and restaurant where we can experience a truly wonderful life in Australia?
I would be grateful to receive a reply at your earliest convenience.
Best regards,
Li Hua
【解析】这是一篇命题作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时,要注意以下几点:1. 通篇以一般现在时。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词,使上下文行文流畅,衔接自然流程。3. 注意语气。要注意语气应该比较恳切。4.文章开头应表明写作目的。本文的难点在于该以什么样的方式询问,每条信息的询问应采取不同的方式这样作文才会显得新颖独特,而且信息之间的连接也要用不同的词避免重复