Question

【题目】假定你是李华。你们班的外教Smith先生即将回国。你将代表全班在欢送会上发言。请你用英文发言稿， 内容包括：

1. 赞扬Smith 的人品和工作。

2. 感谢他在学习和生活中给予的帮助。

3. 表达对Smith的祝福。

注意：1. 词数100左右。发言稿的开头已给出，不计入总词数。

2. 可适当增加细节，使行文连贯。

Dear Mr. Smith,

It’s hard to say “goodbye”. Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you, for you’ve done so much for us in these years. _____________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,

It’s hard to say “goodbye”. Words cannot convey our endless love and thanks to you, for you’ve done so much for us in these years.

You are so humorous and easy-going that everyone wants to be your friends. We do appreciate the way of your teaching. It seems that you have magic to make your lectures lively and interesting. With your guidance, all of us have made great progress. You care about not only our study but also our life. Whenever we’re in trouble, you’re always the first man we can depend on. After class you often join us in games, during which we’ve shared much happiness.

Thank you again for everything you’ve done for us. Wish you a safe journey home and a happy life in the future.

【解析】这是一篇提纲类作文。文章内容要点已经给出。同学们在写这篇文章时，要注意以下几点：1. 通篇以一般现在时态为主。2. 要点要齐全。但是不要对要点进行简单的罗列。可以使用适当的连接词，使上下文行文流畅，衔接自然流程。3.

注意语气。既然该文是欢送会上的发言稿，所以要注意语气应该比较恳切。该文的写作难点在第二条内容上：感谢他在学习和生活中给予的帮助。一定要通过简单的例子作为支撑。否则会显得说服力不够，内容不够丰满。写这部分内容时，学生可以采取简单句和复合句结合的方法。

【范文亮点】

1. 范文采取了状语从句（Whenever we’re in trouble, you’re always the first man we can depend on..）；非限定性定语从句（After class you often join us in games, during which we’ve shared much happiness.）及（it is hard to do…）和（It seems that…）等句式。

2. 文章采用了easy-going； guidance；make great progress；depend on等高级单词或短语。