题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的美国好友Alice将近期来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写信,告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅游行程。同时,委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包,你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Alice,
I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing. I am writing to tell you my willingness to make arrangements for your tour.
As for accommodation, you have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel, which I can reserve for you in advance if you like. Besides, I’d like to help you work out a travel schedule. By the way, could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse if it doesn’t bother you? With my mother’s birthday approaching, I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.
Look forward to meeting you soon. I hope you will have fun here.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
试题分析:假如你是李华,你的美国好友Alice将近期来你所在的城市旅游。请给她写信,告诉她你愿意为她安排住宿及旅游行程。同时,委托她帮你买一个Coach牌子的小钱包,你打算将其作为生日礼物送给妈妈。写作时不要逐句翻译,可适当增加细节以使行文连贯同时要把所提示的点写全,语句通顺,同时要注意准确运用时态、语态、上下文意思连贯,符合逻辑关系。根据句意适当使用并列连词,同时也要合理运用高级词汇和高级句子为文章增色添彩。注意:1.词数100左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
【亮点说明】本文是一篇英语书信,格式正确,内容齐全,句子衔接紧密,布局合理,同时文章使用高级句子。I am delighted to hear that you will come to my city for sightseeing.宾语从句用在句中;you have the option of either staying in my home or in a hotel, which I can reserve for you in advance if you like.非限制性定语从句用在句中;could you do me a favor and purchase a Coach purse if it doesn’t bother you?含条件状语从句的问句运用恰如其分;With my mother’s birthday approaching, I wish to present it to her as a birthday gift.with的独立主格结构巧妙至极;另外,As for accommodation, Besides, By the way的运用为文章增色添彩。