Question

【题目】假定英语课上英语老师要求同桌之间互相修改作文，请你修改你同桌的以下作文。

文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在该词下面写出该加的词。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1、每处错误及修改均仅限一词。

2、只允许修改10处，多者（从11处起）不计分。

Dear Tom,

How is everything going with you? In your last e-mail you asked me to tell you something about Isaac Asimov. Here is something I know about him.

Isaac Asimov, an American scientist and a writer, was born on 2 January, 1920. Asimov’s talent for writing became obvious at the age eleven. He told a friend two chapter of a story he had written. The friend thought he was retelling a story from a book, what surprised Asimov and from that moment, he started to take himself serious as a writer. Asimov began having stories publish in science fiction magazines in 1939. Throughout her life, Asimov received many awards, both for his science fiction books and his science books. He died in 1992 as a result of a HIV infection that he has got from a blood transfusion nine years earlier .

That’s what I know about Isaac Asimov. I greatly hope the information is help to you in a way.

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】删除and后的a

age后加of

chapter→chapters

what→which

serious→seriously

publish→published

her→his

a→an

has→had

10. help→helpful

【解析】

这是一封信，在信里作者给朋友介绍了美国科学家兼作家艾萨克.阿西莫夫的生平。

考查零冠词。此处考查身份兼具只需要一个冠词，结合文意艾萨克.阿西莫夫即是科学家又是作家，此处是身份兼具，只需一个冠词，故删除and后的a。

考查介词。此处考查短语at the age of在几岁，故在age后加of

考查名词的数。chapter（章节）是可数名词，又前面有two，故用复数形式，故将chapter改为chapters。

考查非限定性定语从句。分析句子可知，此处是非限制性定语从句，先行句在从句中充当主语，故用关系代词which，故将what改为which。

考查副词。此处应用副词修饰动词take, 故将serious改为seriously。

考查非谓语动词。分析句子可知，此处应用非谓语动词，逻辑主语stories和publish(出版)之间是被动关系，故用过去分词作宾补，故将publish改为published。

考查代词。结合前文可知，艾萨克.阿西莫夫是男性，故应用his代指“他的”，故将her改为his。

考查冠词。结合句意可知，此处应为“一次艾滋病毒感染”，是泛指，故用不定冠词，又HIV是元音音素开头，故用an，故将a改为an。

考查过去完成时。结合上下文可知， “他因输血获得艾滋病毒”的事情发生在过去的9年以前，即过去之过去，故应用过去完成时，故将has改为had。

考查形容词。此处应用形容词作为is的表语，故将help改为helpful。