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16．假定你是李华，是我校一名高二的学生，暑假你们班同学将赴山东省博物馆参观学习，想邀请外教Andy一起前往．请给他写封邮件，内容包括：
1．集合的时间，地点；
2．交通方式；
3．展览内容：中国剪纸，书画，文物（cultural relic）等．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．
Dear Andy，
I'm very delighted to write a letter toinviteyou tovisit Shandong Museum for an exhibition．We plan to meet at the gate of our school at 7：00 am next Moneday and the school bus will be waiting for us at that time．（高分句型一）
The exhibition includes a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China and some famous books and paintings．Besides，there is a show about Chinese culturalrelics．During the visit，I will show you aroundSpring City--Jinanand this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Jinan．（高分句型二）
Would you please have a look atthe exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假定你是李华，是我校一名高二的学生，暑假你们班同学将赴山东省博物馆参观学习，想邀请外教Andy一起前往．请给他写封邮件，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，要点包括：集合的时间，地点；交通方式；展览内容：中国剪纸，书画，文物（cultural relic）等．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：plan to计划做某事；at the gate of在…门口； Besides另外；enjoy yourself 过得愉快；look forward to盼望；
We plan to meet at the gate of our school at 7：00am next Moneday and the school bus will be waiting for us at that time．（高分句型一）
During the visit，I will show you around Spring City--Jinan and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Jinan．（高分句型二）
I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Andy，
      I'm very delighted to write a letter to invite you to visit  Shandong Museum for an exhibition．We plan to meet at the gate of our school at 7：00 am next Moneday and the school bus will be waiting for us at that time．（高分句型一）
     The exhibition  includes a collection of works created by some famous paper-cutting artists in China and some famous books and paintings．Besides，there is a show about Chinese cultural relics．During the visit，I will show you around Spring City--Jinan and this is a good chance for you to enjoy yourself and learn more about Jinan．（高分句型二）
      Would you please have a look at the exhibition with me？I'd appreciate it if you could accept my invitation．（高分句型三） I'm looking forward to receiving your reply as soon as possible．
                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                     Yours，
                                                                                                                        Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．