Question

9．阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇150词左右的英语短文．
"Can I see my baby？"asked the happy new mother．The bundle（婴儿包）was placed in her arms and when she moved the fold of cloth to look upon his tiny face，she gasped-the baby has been born without ears．Time，however，proved that the baby's hearing was perfect except his appearance．
One day when he rushed home from school and threw himself into his mother's arms，he cried out bitterly，"A boy，a big boy…called me a f-…freak．"She sighed，knowing that his life was to be endless of heartbreaks．
He grew up，handsome for his misfortune．A favorite with his fellow students，he might have been class president，but for that．He developed a gift for literature and music．
The boy's father had a talk with he family doctor．Could nothing be done？"I believe we could graft（移植）on a pair of outer ears，if they could be donated，"the doctor decided．So the search began for a person who would make such a sacrifice a young man．Two years went by．Then，"You're going to the hospital，son．Mother and I have someone who will donate the ears you need．Bt it's a secret，"said the father．
The operation was a brilliant success．His talents blossomed （开花）into genius．School and college became a series of successes．Later he married and entered the diplomatic（外交）service．"But I must know!"he urged his father．"Who gave so much for me？I could never do enough for him．"
"I do not believer you could，"said the father，"but the agreement was that you are not to know…．not yet．"The years kept the secret，but the day did come…．one of the darkest days that ever pass through a son．He stood with his father over his mother's casket（棺材）．Slowly and tenderly，the father stretched forth a hand and raised the thick，reddish-brown hair to let out the secret．
[写作内容]
1、以约30个词概括这个感人的故事；
2、以约120个词，请就"在受别人的帮助中，学会了帮助别人"的话题写一篇英语短文，表达你内心的感受，并包括如下要点：
1）你看完这个故事后，你如何评价这位母亲的无私行为；
2）请以你的日常生活经历的事情为例，说明别人的善良行为对你的影响；
3）你的感想．
[写作要求]
1、作文中可使用自己的亲身经历或虚构的故事，也可以参照阅读材料的内容，但不得直接引用原文中的句子；
2、作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称；
3、标题自定．
[评分标准]概括准确、语言规范、内容合适，篇章连贯．
Help is AlwaysUnselfish
A selfish motherdonated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it．At last，the son got the secret from his father after his mother died．
Help is alwaysunselfish．The mother donated her ears to her son，showing her greatest love toher child．From these，we can know how difficult it is for parents to raisetheir children．
In the daily life，we always get kind help from ourteachers，classmates and friends．And their kind help is always unselfish．WhenI was in Senior Middle School，I lived in the school．Every time I was ill，my teachers and classmates gave me kind help，taking goodcare of me all the time．In today's society，I was affected by some bad things，which made me think that there was no kindness in the world．It was my friendswho did everything to help me out．
From these experiences，I have realized that helpingothers is necessary，and true love does exist in our daily life．Since then，Ihave changed myself a lot，and I also give hands to others when they are inneed of help．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是读写任务型写作，这类作文可按照三段式模板写：第一段：概况所给短文要点．第二段：过渡词引出主题句---阐述理由或列举事例．第三段：个人观点．特别要注意第一段的概括．用自己的语言概括，不能照搬照抄原文．时态一般用一般过去时或一般现在时．人称一般用第三人称．重要短语：donate sth to sb（捐赠），raise sb（抚养某人），help sb out （帮某人摆脱困境），give hands to sb（帮助某人），be in need of（需要…），all the time（一直）

解答 Help is AlwaysUnselfish
A selfish motherdonated her ears to her imperfect son without telling him about it．At last，the son got the secret from his father after his mother died．（概括）
Help is alwaysunselfish．The mother donated her ears to her son，showing her greatest love toher child．【高分句型】Fromthese，we can know how difficult it is for parents to raise their children．（评价无私母亲的行为）In the daily life，we always get kind helpfrom our teachers，classmates and friends．And their kind help is alwaysunselfish．When I was in Senior Middle School，I lived inthe school．Every time I was ill，my teachers and classmates gave me kind help，taking good care of me all the time．【高分句型】In today's society，I was affected by somebad things，which made me think that there was no kindness in the world．It wasmy friends who did everything to help me out．（举例说明被人的善举对自己的影响）
From these experiences，I have realized that helpingothers is necessary，and true love does exist in our daily life．Since then，Ihave changed myself a lot，and I also give hands to others when they are inneed of help．（自己的感想）

点评 读写任务型写作是将阅读与写作有机结合，要求考生既能读懂文章信息，又要依据要求规范连贯地表达内容，其中准确概括很有挑战且十分重要，根据记叙文、议论文、说明文等不同文体作相应概括，总的来说，遵循以下步骤：确定主题句；寻找关键词；重构主题句；重组支持句．