题目内容
【题目】假如你是李华,你的笔友Tom发来电子邮件询问你的音乐喜好和你在新年晚会上的表现。请你给他写封电子邮件,回答他的所有问题。
注意:1.词数100左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.信的抬头与结尾已为你写好,但不计入总词数。
Hi, Tom,
As you know, I’m music mad.
By the way, do you love music as well?
【答案】
Hi, Tom
As you know, I’m music mad. Of all kinds of music, pop is my favorite. I am crazy about it. I think its lyrics are really catchy and meaningful and I can learn to sing easily. Pop makes my life delightful and alive. I can’t stand rock music. It’s too loud and noisy. Although I don’t have enough spare time to enjoy music, I often listen to it on MP3 on my way to school. At home if I don’t study, the music will be on all the time.
At the New Year Party, I played the violin in the school orchestra. I think we played pretty well. The audience gave us a big clap.
By the way, do you love music as well?
【解析】
试题分析:题目要求根据所给要点写一篇邮件,记述记述自己的爱好等。写作要求包括:回答上述邮件中的问题,词数在100词左右,注意开头和结尾不计入总词数;不能出现真实姓名,注意时态的正确使用;不要出现标点和拼写错误,尽量保持卷面整洁、字体美观;注意行文的连贯性。
亮点说明:范文使用了一些重要的短语:Of all kinds of be crazy about 等使用得当,叙事清晰;
范文注意使用了现在完成时、一般现在时、一般过去时等不同的时态来叙述不同的事情,对时态有较好的把握;范文注意使用频度副词often等来表示强调,使表达更加生动;
范文使用了很多形容词 delightful alive catchy meaningful 等使作文更有条理,做到了行文连贯。
【题目】How do we find happiness every single day? How do we get more out of life to the fullest? There are 3 easy ways to enjoy life in daily life.
One way to find happiness within you is to show your appreciation to others. Appreciation not only gives happiness to others but we also receive happiness in return first for writing a letter of appreciation and second for the response we get. I encourage you to take 3 Post-it notes and write one Post-it of appreciation for your classmate, one for your friend and one for your parents and see the happiness you feel within and the joy you receive in return. It doesn’t cost any money; it’s simple and very rewarding.
Often we are too tough on ourselves by telling us we could have done things better. Have a look at your life and evaluate where you are today and what you have achieved. Often we tend to forget the achievements during the journey of our life and we need to be reminded. Take 5 minutes right now to write down what you have achieved in life and what you are proud of. Go over the list and tell yourself what a wond]erful person you are and what a great job you have done.
Have you ever kept a journal? Sometimes writing things down will give us clarity and awareness. When you write down in a journal, you have the ability to express yourself as you truly would like to be. Writing is part of inner peace, which is a road towards happiness. Take 5 minutes every day to write down your ideas and thoughts in your journal. By doing so, you will find inner peace and a sense of happiness.
The 3 easy steps above take only 15 minutes. Not only will it bring happiness to you but also to others.
How to【1】. |
Show your appreciation to others | ● Write an 【2】 to give happiness to others and receive happiness in return. ● Send a Post-it note to your classmate, 【3】 . ● It costs 【4】 , but benefits you a lot. |
【5】. | ● Write down your 【6】 and your proud things. ● Keep the list as a reminder that you are a successful person. |
Keep a journal | ● It will give you 【7】 . ● It will help you find 【8】 and happiness. |
【9】. | If you follow 【10】 , you will find happiness and bring it to others. |