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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下面画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改仅限一词。

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处）不计分。

Dear Ms Smith,

I’m writing to ask that you could do me a favor. I’ve just finished essay named “Differences between traditional Chinese and Western festivals”, but I’m not sure whether it is well written. To be honestly, I’m not that familiar with some traditional west festivals. That’s because I’m turning to you for help. I’d be appreciate it if you could spare some time to look into my essay for possible mistakes and polish them. Also, I’m looking forward to your valuable advices. My essay has been sending to you along with this email. I hope it won’t cause you too many trouble.

Thank you in advance.

Yours sincerely

LiHua

【答案】1.that→if/ whether 2.finished后加an 3.honestly→honest 4.west→western 5. because→why 6. 去掉appreciate前的be 7.into→through 8. advices→advice

9.sending→sent 10. many →much

【解析】

本文是应用文，是一封求助信，作者请求对方帮助修改润色论文。

1.考查从属连词。句意：我写信是想请问你是否能帮我一个忙。根据句意，此处应该用if/ whether引导宾语从句，意思为“是否”；that引导宾语从句时无任何意义。故that改为if/ whether。

2.考查冠词。此处用不定冠词an表示数量，意思为“一篇”；essay的发音是以元音音素开头，应用不定冠词an。故finished后加an。

3.考查固定短语。短语to be honest，意思为“老实说”；在be动词后应该用形容词形式。故honestly改为honest。

4.考查形容词。修饰名词festivals，应该用形容词形式；形容词western意思为“西方的”。故west改为western。

5.考查从属连词。句意：这就是为什么我向你求助。句型That is because…“那是因为……”，后面接表示原因的表语从句；That is why…“那就是为什么……”，后面接表示结果的表语从句。根据句意，此处应该表示结果的表语从句。故because改为why。

6.考查固定句型。句型I’d appreciate it if…“如果……，我将不胜感激。”主语I和appreciate之间是逻辑上的主动关系，不需要be动词。故去掉appreciate前的be。

7.考查固定短语。句意：如果您能抽出时间查看一下我的文章中可能存在的错误并加以润色，我将不胜感激。短语look into意思为“向里面看，调查”；根据句意，此处应该是短语look through，意思为“浏览，仔细查看”。故into改为through。

8.考查不可数名词。advice是不可数名词，没有复数形式，故advices改为advice。

9.考查被动语态。句意：我的论文已经随同邮件一起发送给你了。句子主语my essay 和send之间为逻辑上的动宾关系，应该用被动语态；send是不规则变化动词，过去分词为sent。故sending改为sent。

10.考查形容词。many修饰可数名词的复数形式；trouble是不可数名词，应该用much修饰。故many改为much。

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删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

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2.只允许修改5处，多者(从第6处起)不计分。

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