Question

【题目】短文改错

假段定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号( )，并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2。只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

When I first learned to write in English, I run into many difficulties．The mainly problem was that I always thought in Chinese but tried to translate everything into Chinese．My teacher advised me to keep the diaries．I followed her advices．Happily it worked．Soon I began to enjoy talk to myself on paper as I was learning to express me in simple English. One day I wrote a short story and showed to my teacher．She liked it very much that she read it to the class．Everyone said the story was a good one, I was great encouraged by their words．

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】run--- ran

【2】mainly---main

【3】but--- and

【4】去掉the

【5】advices---advice

【6】talk--- talking

【7】me--- myself

【8】showed后加it

【9】very---so

【10】great--- greatly

【解析】

【1】run--- ran 根据句意可知此处是一般过去时态，故把run--- ran。

【2】mainly---main 形容词修饰名词，故把mainly---main。

【3】but--- and 句意：我总是用汉语想并尽可能把一切翻译成汉语。此处是表示递进的并列关系，故把but--- and。

【4】去掉the 固定搭配：keep a diary/keep diaries写日记，故去掉the。

【5】advices---advice advice是不可数名词，故把advices---advice。

【6】talk--- talking 固定结构：enjoy doing sth.喜爱做某事，故把talk--- talking。

【7】me--- myself 句意：用简单的英语表达我自己，故把me--- myself。

【8】showed后加it 句意：我写了一篇短故事，并把它展示给我的老师。故在showed后加it。

【9】very---so 句意：她是如此喜欢我写的故事，以至于把它读给全班同学。so---that---如此---以至于，在这里引导结果状语从句，故把very---so。

【10】great--- greatly 句意：我受到了极大地鼓舞。副词修饰动词，故把great--- greatly。

【知识归纳】

1.副词修饰动词，比如第10小题，great--- greatly 句意：我受到了极大地鼓舞。副词修饰动词，故把great--- greatly。He was waiting for us patiently when I saw him.当我看见他时，他正在耐心地等我们。

2. 遇到名词时要看它是可数名词还是不可数名词。如果是可数名词则要考虑是单数还是复数；如果是不可数名词则要考虑不可数名词的特点（无单、复数之分）。