题目内容
7.假定英语课上,老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文.作文中共有10处错误,每句中最多有两处.错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改.增加:在缺词处加一个漏词符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词.
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉.
修改:在错的词下面画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词.
意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词:
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分.
On the flight,I sat next to an old lady who looked very frightening.She closed her eyes tightly and grasped her red bag on her lap.I thought I might be nervous,so I planned to chat with her to make her to feel relaxed.We talk a lot about our families and experiences.When the fight over,I also helped her carry her luggages.She was so grateful about y help that she gave me the big hug when we were going to leave.On our way out,we waved good-bye.She kept on turning back to see me unless we couldn't see each other any long.
分析 本文主要讲述作者认为坐在旁边的一位老太太紧张,便与其聊天以缓解紧张.飞行结束后,帮她搬运行李,老人对此很感激,给了作者一个大的拥抱,看着作者离开直到彼此看不见为止.
解答 On the flight,I sat next to an old lady who looked very frightening.She closed her eyes tightly and grasped her red bag on her lap.I thought I might be nervous,so I planned to chat with her to make her to feel relaxed.We talk a lot about our families and experiences.When the fight∧over,I also helped her carry her luggages.She was so grateful about my help that she gave me the big hug when we were going to leave.On our way out,we waved good-bye.She kept on turning back to see me unless we couldn't see each other any long.
详解:
1.frightening改为frightened 考查过去分词.过去分词作表语,多半用来表示人物所处的心理状态或情感变化,其主语多半是人.
2.I改为she 考查代词.she指代前文提到的an old lady.
3.去掉to 考查动词不定式.make后接动词时用不带to的动词不定式作宾语补足语.
4.talk改为talked 考查动词时态.此处讲述的是过去的事情,要用一般过去时态.
5.加was 考查句子结构.分析句子结构,句中缺少谓语,因the fight是单数,用was构成系表结构.
6.luggages改为luggage 考查名词.luggage是不可数名词,没有复数形式.
7.about改为for 考查介词.be grateful for意为"因…感激",是固定固定搭配.
8.the改为a 考查冠词.hug是可数名词,单数形式前加不定冠词a表示泛指.
9.unless改为until 考查连词.根据句意:直到我们看不到彼此.用连词until引导时间状语从句.
10.long改为longer 考查固定搭配.not…any longer意为"不再",是固定搭配.
点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文,短文故事,书信等,具有很强的实用性.短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际,从表面上看类似一篇学生习作.首先,通读全文,了解短文大意,把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑,在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好,再进行逐句改错.其次,要进行逐个句子的改错.这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意.最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍,检查答案是否正确,感觉是否还有不妥之处,最终形成定稿.
![](http://thumb2018.1010pic.com/images/loading.gif)
Since I started to work for a (44)Bcompany,however,I have done most of my traveling through the Internet.By using the Internet,I have seen the (45)Cof many cities on my computer screen.And I have really made business (46)D,too.With the help of the Internet,I have also got (47)Aabout food in different countries.
Therefore,I was beginning to feel that actual trips were (48)Bnecessary when I happened to read a famous chef's (厨师) comment on the Internet.He said,"It is very difficult to have real Italian food in a foreign country,because we can't enjoy food and the(49)Caround us at the same time.So why don't you fly over to Italy and enjoy real Italian(50)B?"Those words reminded me of my(51)Cadvice.As information technology (52)D,you might be able to do without making some real trips.But this also means that you will miss the various(53)Byou can get from traveling.
Today there are people who(54)Adirect communication with others and spend much of their time on the Internet.It is not surprising to see a group of people(55)Bnot with each other but into their microphones(麦克风).It seems as if such people are(56)Cby an invisible(看不见的) wall.They seem to be losing out on a good chance to(57)Dand talk with other people.I do not think that they are taking good advantage of information technology.We should use information technology as a tool to make our daily(58)Amore fruitful(富有成效的).However,we should never let it(59)Cour time for face-to-face communication.Let's make use of information technology more(60)A,and have great fun in experiencing the actual world.
41.A.promised | B.allowed | C.hurried | D.encouraged |
42.A.build up | B.use | C.practice | D.exchange |
43.A.agreed with | B.learned from | C.followed | D.obeyed |
44.A.computer | B.food | C.clothing | D.machine |
45.A.life | B.rivers | C.sights | D.houses |
46.A.plans | B.bargain | C.progress | D.trips |
47.A.information | B.taste | C.cooks | D.feelings |
48.A.even more | B.no longer | C.any longer | D.any more |
49A.people | B.drink | C.atmosphere | D.environment |
50.A.shoes | B.dishes | C.customers | D.situations |
51.A.friends' | B.parents' | C.professor's | D.boss's |
52.A.produces | B.advertises | C.forms | D.advances |
53.A.news | B.pleasures | C.troubles | D.places |
54.A.avoid | B.keep | C.lose | D.enjoy |
55.A.meeting | B.talking | C.telling | D.traveling |
56.A.stopped | B.met | C.surrounded | D.hurt |
57.A.look at | B.employ | C.travel | D.meet |
58.A.communication | B.study | C.work | D.action |
59.A.spare | B.increase | C.reduce | D.make use of |
60.A.wisely | B.quickly | C.or less | D.slowly |