Question

【题目】当今全球环境问题变得越来越严重。请你根据漫画内容，以李华的名义给“China Daily”写一封信，描述这种状况，并提出保护环境的建议。

注意：

1．不要拘泥于要点，可以适当发挥，词数100左右。

2．参考词汇：人口膨胀：population expansion；过度开发：overdevelopment

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

Environmental problems are becoming more and more serious all over the world.

With the development of society, private cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas, which does great harm to the environment. As we all know, waste water from factories is poured continuously into rivers without being treated. Worse still, because of population expansion and overdevelopment, the problem of lack of water is becoming more and more serious. With trees on the hills cut down, the whole ecological balance of the earth is being damaged. It cannot be denied that massive destruction of the environment has brought about negative effects and become a great threat to man’s existence.

In my opinion, our government should spare no effort to let people fully realize the importance of environmental protection and take more concrete measures to deal with it. We hope that all these measures will be of great use and only in this way can a healthy environment be brought back.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文要求根据漫画给“China Daily”写一封信，描述全球环境问题，并提出保护环境的建议。文章给出了提纲，成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

【亮点说明】1.使用高级句型：独立结构和which引导的定语从句With the development of society, private cars make great noises and give off poisonous gas, which does great harm to the environment.；as引导的定语从句As we all know, waste water from factories is poured continuously into rivers without being treated...；部分倒装only in this way can a healthy environment be brought back。2.使用了过渡词语：Worse still，In my opinion等；3.使用了重要短语：give off发出，释放，cut down砍倒，spare no effort to不遗余力的做，take measures采取措施。