Question

【题目】短文改错

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mr. Green,

I’m very exciting to learn that you will start a magazine together. That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.

Some of the columns that you mention in the letter are really my cup of tea. ＂Cultural Express＂ give us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different part of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each another. Apart from that, ＂ Blurt Out＂ is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and improving oral English. ＂ Entertainment＂ is also cool! The popular singers, actors or celebrities are so attractively that you absolutely can’t miss this part. Teenagers are to fond of popular things, too.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read this magazine.

Yours,

Li Ming

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Green,

I’m very to learn that you will start a magazine together. That sounds great and I definitely agree you on that.

Some of the columns that you in the letter are really my cup of tea. ＂Cultural Express＂ us a better understanding of the world. Since people from different of the world have different values, it’s necessary to learn from each . Apart from that, ＂Blurt Out＂ is pretty good for Chinese students to learn English idioms and oral English. ＂Entertainment＂ is also cool! The popular singers, actors celebrities are so that you absolutely can’t miss this part. Teenagers are fond of popular things, too.

Well, I can’t list more. I really can’t wait to read this magazine.

Yours,

Li Ming

【解析】

第一处：exciting→ excited excited（人）兴奋的；exciting令人兴奋的（事情）。此处修饰人，故用excited。

第二处：agree后加with agree是不及物动词，不能直接加宾语。agree with sb.表示＂同意某人的观点、看法＂，故在agree后加with。

第三处：mention→ mentioned that引导的定语从句中的动作发生在过去，故应使用一般过去时。

第四处：give→ gives ＂Cultural Express＂ 是专栏标题，作主语时谓语动词应使用第三人称单数。

第五处：part→ parts 这里表示＂不同的地域＂，diferent后接复数名词。

第六处：another→ other ＂向彼此学习＂ 应用learn from each other。

第七处：improving→ improve and连接了两个不定式to do作状语，第二个不定式符号to可省略，故此处用动词原形。

第八处：or→ and 这里表示并列，而不表示选择，故这里应改为and。

第九处：attractively→ attractive 这里是so…that…结构，so前面是be动词，此处应用形容词，故将attractively改为attractive。

第十处：去掉to be fond of是固定短语，意思是＂喜欢＂。