Question

【题目】Correction 5（2016·新课标II卷）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about how to do during the holiday. We can chose between staying at home and take a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable but there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad, we can broaden your view and gain knowledges we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we can go to places of interest nearby. I thought that it is a good idea. It does not cost many, yet we can still learn a lot.

Answer 1

【答案】

The summer holiday is coming. My classmates and I are talking about to do during the holiday. We can between staying at home and a trip. If we stay at home, it is comfortable there is no need to spend money. But in that case, we will learn little about world. If we go on a trip abroad， we can broaden view and gain we cannot get from books. Some classmates suggest we 或go to places of interest nearby. I that it is a good idea. It does not cost , yet we can still learn a lot.

【解析】

第一处：how 改为what。考查宾语从句。分析句子可知，are talking about 后为宾语从句，且从句中do缺少宾语，故将how改为what。

第二处：chose 改为choose。考查情态动词的用法。情态动词后接动词原形。

第三处：take 改为taking。考查非谓语动词。因为and连接两个并列的成分，且介词后接动名词形式，所以将take改为taking。

第四处：but改为and。考查连词。前后句之间为并列关系，故将but改为and。

第五处：在world前加the。考查冠词。根据语境可知，此处表示特指，故应用定冠词the。

第六处：your改为our。考查代词。因为句子的主语为＂we＂，故此处用our。

第七处：knowledges 改为knowledge。考查名词的数。knowledge为不可数名词，只能用单数形式。

第八处：删除can或将can改为 should。考查虚拟语气。suggest 意为＂建议＂时，其后的宾语从句要使用虚拟语气，谓语动词用should+动词原形，should可以省略。

第九处：thought改为think。考查动词的时态。全文的时态均以一般现在时为主，故此处应用一般现在时。

第十处：many改为much。考查代词。表示＂钱＂的多少时，要用much而不是many。