题目内容
【题目】短文改错(共10小题;每小题l分,满分10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:
1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2. 只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.
【答案】
It is shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students
have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight
. And a larger percentage
sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey
parents or teachers. Personally, I think we
should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without
a sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only
studies. As a result, I suggest we
given less homework
more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.
【解析】
第一处:clear→clearly。词性错误。此处修饰过去分词shown,要用副词clearly"清晰地"。
第二处:surveying→surveyed。非谓语动词错误。本句中的谓语动词是have,故students后应是分词作后置定语,survey与所修饰的students构成被动关系,所以用过去分词。
第三处:去掉too。副词多用。句中已经有as well as表示"也"了,故句尾的too是多余的。
第四处:lacks→lack。主谓一致错误。percentage作主语时,谓语与它所修饰的名词或指代的名词一致。此处指学生,所以谓语动词用复数。
第五处:our→their。代词错误。42%的学生不听他们父母和老师的话。主语是42% of the students,是第三人称,故此处形容词性物主代词用their。
第六处:student→students。名词单复数错误。we后面的名词是其同位语,所以用student的复数形式以与we一致。
第七处:Without后加a。冠词漏用。body是可数名词,且此处泛指一个好的身体,故加冠词a。
第八处:on→to。介词错误。pay attention to"注意……"是固定搭配,此处用的是该短语的被动形式。
第九处:are→be。虚拟语气错误。suggest在此处表示"建议",因此后跟的宾语从句应用虚拟语气,即从句谓语用"should+do"形式,且should可以省略。故此处应把are改为be。
第十处:or→and。连词错误。我建议我们应该少被布置点作业,多些时间进行课外活动。本句是肯定句,此处不表示选择意义,而指的是并列的两个名词,表示"及",应用and。
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