Question

【题目】短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

It is clear shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students surveying have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight too. And a larger percentage lacks sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey our parents or teachers. Personally, I think we student should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only on studies. As a result, I suggest we are given less homework or more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

Answer 1

【答案】

It is shown that many middle school students have physical and mental problems. 68% of the students have studying anxiety as well as poor eyesight . And a larger percentage sleep. 52% are short of physical exercise. 42% of the students won’t obey parents or teachers. Personally, I think we should balance our physical exercise and studies. Without a sound body, one can’t achieve anything. However, too much attention has been paid only studies. As a result, I suggest we given less homework more time for out-of-classroom activities. Only in this way can we live a happy and healthy life.

【解析】

第一处：clear→clearly。词性错误。此处修饰过去分词shown，要用副词clearly＂清晰地＂。

第二处：surveying→surveyed。非谓语动词错误。本句中的谓语动词是have，故students后应是分词作后置定语，survey与所修饰的students构成被动关系，所以用过去分词。

第三处：去掉too。副词多用。句中已经有as well as表示＂也＂了，故句尾的too是多余的。

第四处：lacks→lack。主谓一致错误。percentage作主语时，谓语与它所修饰的名词或指代的名词一致。此处指学生，所以谓语动词用复数。

第五处：our→their。代词错误。42%的学生不听他们父母和老师的话。主语是42% of the students，是第三人称，故此处形容词性物主代词用their。

第六处：student→students。名词单复数错误。we后面的名词是其同位语，所以用student的复数形式以与we一致。

第七处：Without后加a。冠词漏用。body是可数名词，且此处泛指一个好的身体，故加冠词a。

第八处：on→to。介词错误。pay attention to＂注意……＂是固定搭配，此处用的是该短语的被动形式。

第九处：are→be。虚拟语气错误。suggest在此处表示＂建议＂，因此后跟的宾语从句应用虚拟语气，即从句谓语用＂should+do＂形式，且should可以省略。故此处应把are改为be。

第十处：or→and。连词错误。我建议我们应该少被布置点作业，多些时间进行课外活动。本句是肯定句，此处不表示选择意义，而指的是并列的两个名词，表示＂及＂，应用and。