Question

【题目】 写作（共两节，满分35分）（2015济南市高三二模）

第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）

My classmates and I take part in a wildness survival program from July 10th to July 13th this summer. Before we started, we given a compass, a map, a firstaid kit, tents, food, any clothes and so on. On the way we climbed three more hills and swam across two rivers. We lost our way in the forest. Lucky we found the right direction with a compass. As soon as they arrived at the campsite, we put up our tents, made a fire and then started cooking. We also learned what to give firstaid.

Through the program, we learned to use knowledge gaining in class to solve problem. It was quite an unforgettable experience for me.

Answer 1

【答案】

My classmates and I part in a wildness survival program from July 10th to July 13th this summer. Before we started, we given a compass, a map, a firstaid kit, tents, food, clothes and so on. On the way we climbed three more hills and swam across two rivers. We lost our way in the forest. we found the right direction with compass. As soon as arrived at the campsite, we put up our tents, made a fire and then started cooking. We also learned to give firstaid.

Through the program, we learned to use knowledge in class to solve . It was quite an unforgettable experience for me.

【解析】

1．命题立意：考查时态。

解析：take→took 根据语境应用一般过去时。故take→took。

2．命题立意：考查语态。

解析：we后加were 句子的主语we是give的动作承受者，应用被动语态。故we后加were。

3．命题立意：考查形容词。

解析：any→some some一些，用在肯定句中；any一些，用在否定句和疑问句中。故any→some。

4．命题立意：考查形容词。

解析：hills前的more去掉 根据上下文只有三座小山，应去掉more。故hills前的more去掉。

5．命题立意：考查副词。

解析：Lucky→Luckily 根据下文可知此处应用副词作状语。故Lucky→Luckily。

6．命题立意：考查冠词。

解析：a→the 根据前文提到compass应用定冠词the修饰。故a→the。

7．命题立意：考查代词。

解析：they→we 根据主句的主语we判断。故they→we。

8．命题立意：考查疑问词与不定式连用。

解析：what→how 根据give后有宾语first aid，不定式中缺少方式状语。故what→how。

9．命题立意：考查非谓语动词。

解析：gaining→gained 根据knowledge是gain的动作承受者，应用过去分词修饰。故gaining→gained。

10．命题立意：考查名词。

解析：problem→problems 根据problem前没有限定词，单数可数名词不能单独使用。故problem→problems。