题目内容
【题目】(浙江省宁波市效实中学等十校2016届高三3月联考)书面表达。
爬山(mountain climbing)是一项很好的运动,修身养性,但涉及环保和森林防火隐患等问题。请你就爬山这项运动的优缺点谈谈自己的看法,写一篇英语短文。
词数:120字左右。
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【答案】
Nowadays there is an increasing number of people who go in for mountain climbing. Indeed, it is an awesome outdoor sport, which can offer us a chance to get close to nature. While climbing a mountain, we can enjoy beautiful views along the way and totally relax ourselves after tiring work or study. Besides, it can not only benefit our health but also shape our character.
However, mountain climbing is also likely to cause some negative effects. Take environmental protection for example, some people always throw away empty bottles or garbage bags along the path while climbing a mountain, which has become a real headache for the cleaners. What’s worse, many forest fires are caused by cigarette ends which are left behind carelessly by some smokers.
To sum up, mountain climbing is a sport worth joining in. But when climbing a mountain, we must pay attention to the two problems mentioned above. Only by our joint efforts can we make mountain climbing enjoyable and worthwhile!
【解析】
试题分析:本文是一篇评论,需要围绕爬山这项运动的优缺点谈自己的看法,任何事情都有两面性,所以学生优点缺点都要写出来,最后再做适当总结。本文应使用一般现在时,并使用第三人称。
范文语言表达能力好,语法结构和词汇的应用基本正确。文中用了 Besides, however, take…for example, What’s worse, To sum up, 等连词,使全文流畅结构紧凑。最后总结时Only by our joint efforts can we make mountain climbing enjoyable and worthwhile!使用倒装句强调只有一起努力才能使这项运动成为享受和值得的。