Question

【题目】（江西师大附中、鹰潭一中2016届高三下学期第一次联考）书面表达。

高考在即，你发现班级中有的同学的压力很大，平时不眠不休拼命做题。请在校英语报上，就此现象，结合自己的经历，写一篇100-120个词的短文，向大家宣传正确的应试态度和做法。（开头已给出，不计入总字数）

We Should Lessen the Test Anxiety

As the College Entrance Examination draws near, quite a few of my classmates suffer much pressure. ______________________________________________________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

We Should Lessen the Test Anxiety

As the College Entrance Examination draws near, quite a few of my classmates suffer much pressure. Some of them bury themselves in endless homework day and night against the clock, which robs them of happiness and does them harm physically and mentally.

Although pressure, to some extent, can provide motivation, too much pressure has a serious negative effect. Pressure can destroy a student’s confidence. More seriously it might make some students lose control of their emotions and behaviors.

Considering the great damage of excessive pressure, we should learn how to relieve pressure. First, we should have a right evaluation of ourselves so as to make use of advantages and avoid disadvantages. Second, we’d better squeeze out some time for fun such as listening to music. Sometimes even crying is an efficient way to release stress. Finally, if you find pressure is nearly beyond your control, you’d better turn to professional psychological guidance.

【解析】

试题分析：本次作文要求根据高考在即，你发现班级中有的同学的压力很大，平时不眠不休拼命做题这一现象在校英语报上，结合自己的经历，写一篇100-120个词的短文，向大家宣传正确的应试态度和做法。故既要完成任务，又要兼顾形式的要求。

写作亮点：本篇条理清楚，要点全面，结构连贯。其句式上的变化既使得文章生动而流畅，也体现了作者驾驭句式的能力。例如：定语从句which robs them of happiness and does them harm physically and mentally.

非谓语动词Considering the great damage of excessive pressure, to release stress.draws near, negative effect, lose control of, make use of , squeeze out 等词汇及First, Second, Finally 等连接词。