Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Last Sunday, my father go to see a film. But in our surprise, he came back soon. He told us about the funny thing what had happened. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. So they looked at their tickets careful, only to find the seats were the same while the color were different. After while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, ＂Sorry, I make a mistake.＂ The fact was that his ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last Sunday, my father to see a film. But our surprise, he came back soon. He told us about the funny thing had happened. He was sitting in his seat a woman came to and said the seat was hers. So they looked at their tickets , only to find the seats were the same while the were different. After while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, ＂Sorry, I a mistake.＂ The fact was that his ticket found under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.

【解析】

第一处：go→ went ＂上周日＂是过去时间，go改成went。

第二处：in→ to to our surprise＂令人惊讶的是＂，为固定搭配。in改成to。

第三处：what→ that 句意表示＂电影院发生的有趣的事情＂，这是定语从句，先行词是thing，定语从句中缺少主语，用that引导定语从句。

第四处：while→ when 句意：他正坐在座位上，这时一个妇女过来了。while引导时间状语从句，表示时间段；when引导时间状语从句，表示时间点，was doing sth. when…某人正在做某事这时……，为固定搭配。

第五处：her→ him 一个妇女朝他走过来，这里的＂他＂是指爸爸，her改成him。

第六处：careful→ carefully 他们很惊讶，所以仔细看了彼此的票。修饰动词用副词carefully。

第七处：color→ colors 因为他们的票有两种颜色，要用复数形式，即color加s。

第八处：while前加a after a while＂过了一会儿＂，是固定短语。

第九处：make→ made 此处是表示爸爸之前犯了错误，因此用过去时。

第十处：去掉out find＂找到＂，强调结果。find out＂查明，弄清＂。他的票是在桌子上的玻璃下＂被找到＂的，用found作his ticket的后置定语。