题目内容
【题目】短文改错
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to hear from you. I’d like tell you something about my voluntary work in the city library.
I got to the library earlier every day. When new books arrived, I helped the librarians move it in, and put them onto different catalogues. After that, each of the books were numbered and put in the right place on the bookshelf.
Although it was hard work and sometimes boring, I had learned a lot. For an example, I have got the idea of how the whole library runs but how to find out the books I need in the shortest time. However, by offering this service in the library, I have made some new friends, that is a very valuable experience for me.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
【1】第一处:tell前加to
【2】第二处:earlier→early
【3】第三处:it→them
【4】第四处:onto→into
【5】第五处:were→was
【6】第六处:had→have
【7】第七处:去掉an
【8】第八处:but→and
【9】第九处:However→Besides/Also/Additionally
【10】第十处:that→which
【解析】
【1】第一处:tell前加to 考查固定短语的用法。would like to do sth.“愿意做某事”,为固定表达。
【2】第二处:earlier→early 考查形容词的用法。这里没有比较的意思,故将earlier改为early。
【3】第三处:it→them 考查人称代词的用法。这里是指代上文中的new books,所以应该用them。故将it改为them。
【4】第四处:onto→into 考查介词的用法。此句是说将书放进不同的目录里,故将onto改为into。
【5】第五处:were→was 考查主谓一致。本句前面的主语是each of the books,所以谓语动词应用单数,而不是复数形式,故将were改为was。
【6】第六处:had→have 考查动词时态的用法。这里主要是强调到目前为止“我已经学到了许多”,所以要用现在完成时。故将had改为have。
【7】第七处:去掉an 考查固定短语的用法。for example“例如”是固定短语,故将an去掉。
【8】第八处:but→and 考查并列连词的用法。此处是递进关系,而不是转折关系,故将but改为and。
【9】第九处:However→Besides/Also/Additionally 考查副词的用法。however用来表示转折,但从上下文来看,这里作者是说通过在图书馆里提供服务,交上了很多新的朋友,应该是进一步地告诉人们他的收获,所以将However改为Besides/Also/Additionally。
【10】第十处:that→which 考查定语从句的用法。分析句子成分可知,空处引导定语从句,且其前有逗号,故此处为非限制性定语从句,又因that只能引导限制性定语从句,所以将that改为which。