Question

【题目】（十七）

入冬以来全国许多地区多日被雾霾覆盖。请根据下面表格里的提示写一篇120词左右的文章，文章应包括以下内容：雾霾天气产生的原因；雾霾天气造成的影响；你的看法和建议（至少两点）。开头已给出，不进入总词数。

参考词汇：雾霾 fog and haze；排放 exhaust；电厂power station

雾霾天气产生的原因	雾霾天气造成的影响	你的看法
	出行方式； 身体健康； 国家形象；	1……. 2…….

Many areas ic China have been covered by fog and haze for days in a row since winter, which causes great trouble to people’s life.

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Answer 1

【答案】

As we can see from the chart, vehicles exhaust is the first to blame, which makes up over half of the total exhaust. And industrial exhaust is another cause, which accounts for nearly 35%. Besides, gas emission from residents is about 5% and the rest is from power station.

Actually, it has brought bad effects on people’s daily life. Firstly, people’s ways of going out are great challenges now, and some of them prefer to stay at home. Secondly, the polluted air does great harm to people’s health, as a result, many diseases related have been spread throughout the whole nation.Finally, the bad living environment has even ruined the image of our country.

Personally, it’s time that we took some prompt measures to address the problem.For one thing, people should strengthen awareness of environmental protection from every detail in life, for another, stricter laws and regulations should be made by the government. Only in this way can we live healthily.

【解析】本文是篇图表材料类作文，材料主旨意图明显，学生很容易把握写作要求和写作目的。考生在写作之前必修认真审题，依次完成写作的要求。首先要从图表出发阐明造成雾霾现象的原因，要注意文章的时态，所有要点都是对客观事实的描述所以要用一般现在时；接着需要根据要点提示写好影响，需要适当的展开；最后发表自己的个人观点主要就如何处理与解决问题，这个写作过程中需要注意句子的衔接，以提高作文的档次。