Question

【题目】短文改错。

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏子符号（∧）并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

One day, I was cooking in the kitchen when the telephone rings. I went to answer it immediately. She was my close friend, Lisa. When we were talking on a phone, the fire alarm sounded. I rushed back to the kitchen. The room full of smoke and the beef was bad burnt. I quickly turned off the gas, opening all the windows, and then rushed out of the house. In my surprise, two fire engines were outside my house. I was rather worrying. I told about the firemen that it was my careless cooking which caused the heavy smoke.

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】rings→ rang

【2】She→ It

【3】a→ the

【4】room和full之间加was

【5】bad→ badly

【6】opening→ opened

【7】In→ To

【8】worrying→ worried

【9】去掉about

【10】which→ that

【解析】

【1】本文是一般过去时，故动词ring要用过去式。所以rings改为rang。

【2】根据文章，我去接电话时并不知道是谁打的电话，故不确定身份的人应该用it来指代。

【3】句意：当我们打电话时，火警响了。on the phone在打电话，打电话。

【4】句意：屋里充满烟，牛肉也被烧焦了。be full of充满。因文章是过去的经历，故在room和full之间加was。

【5】句意：屋里充满烟，牛肉也被烧焦了。这里用副词来修饰句子，故bad改为badly。

【6】句意：我迅速关掉煤气，打开窗户然后冲出房间。turn off, open及rush是三个并列的动作，应该保持时态的一致性。故opening改为opened。

【7】to my surprise为固定结构，意为“令我吃惊的是”。

【8】句意：我感到很担心。worried感到担心的；worrying令人担心的。根据句意可知worrying改为worried。

【9】tell是及物动词，可接双宾语，故去掉about。

【10】句意：是我的粗心烹饪导致了浓烟。本句是强调句型，强调my careless cooking，故which改为that。