Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处错误。错误涉及一个单词的增加,删除或修改。按下列情况改正：

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（A)，写出该加的词。

修改:在错的词下画一横线，写出改正后的词。

注意:每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Dear Ralph,

I am an university student. I once thought life at the university must be excellent, but now I changed my mind. I have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the dormitory. Last term, I got along peacefully and happy. But I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don't talk with me, and they've become cold toward me. Many time, I have wanted to talk with them about how I felt, and I failed to find an opening. When leaving alone, I always recall this sadness. But I am an honest student. Why don't I win true friendship?

Yours sincerely,

John

Answer 1

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【解析】Dear Ralph,

1 am an university student. I once thought life at the uni-

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versity must be excellent，but now I ∧ changed my mind. I

have

have three roommates, and I was the last one to move into the

dormitory. Last term， I got along peacefully and happy . But

we happily

I find they are not willing to be with me now. They don't talk

with me, and they've become cold toward me. Many time ，I

colder times

have wanted to talk with them about how I felt, and I failed to

but

find an opening. When leaving alone，I always recall this sad-

left

ness. But I am an honest student. Why don't I win true friend-

can't

ship?

Yours sincerely.

John