题目内容
【题目】短文改错 (每小题1分，共10分)
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处，每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：
1. 每处错误及其修改均限一词；
2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
Last week our school hold a sports meeting. Realize it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for whom our class had made a lot of preparations. Much for our excitement, our performance was a success. My classmates took part in various event such as running, the high jump and the long jump.
Due to the hard training the athletes had done before, their performance was very impressive. My classmates applauded and cheered for the athletes, so some raised their cameras to capture the exciting moments. The result was announced. Our class won the second place and our efforts were paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together proud. This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of them as time goes by.
【答案】
Last week our school 
a sports meeting. 
it was our last school sports meeting, we decided to make it 
unforgettable experience. We first attended the opening ceremony, for 
our class had made a lot of preparations. Much 
our excitement, our performance was a success. My classmates took part in various 
such as running, the high jump and the long jump.
Due to the hard training the athletes had done before, their performance was very impressive. My classmates applauded and cheered for the athletes, 
some raised their cameras to capture the exciting moments. The result was announced. Our class won the second place and our efforts 
paid off! Cup in hand, we took a picture together
. This sports meeting will be a precious memory for all of 
as time goes by.
【解析】
【文章大意】作者和同学们参加了毕业前的最后一次校运会。在开幕式和各项比赛中，他们都表现很出色，取得了优异的成绩，使本次运动会成为难忘的一次经历。
第一处：hold改为held。考查时态。句中时间状语last week说明hold应是过去的动作，故用一般过去时held。
第二处：realize改为realizing。考查非谓语动词。realize位于主谓结构we decided之前，故应用其非谓语形式作状语，且该动词与主语we是逻辑上的主动关系，与谓语动词decided表示的动作同时发生，故用realizing。
第三处：unforgettable前加an。考查冠词。该句中experience表示＂经历＂，是可数名词，其单数形式前应加不定冠词，且unforgettable第一个音节是元音，故用an。
第四处：whom改为which。考查定语从句。非限制性定语从句中指代先行词the opening ceremony，应用which。
第五处：for改为to。考查介词。to one’s excitement是固定结构，表示＂令某人兴奋的是……＂，故将for改为to。
第六处：event改为events。考查名词。various表示＂各种各样的＂，应修饰可数名词复数，故将event改为events。
第七处：so改为and。考查连词。此处前后两句在意义上是顺承关系，而不是因果关系，故将so改为and。
第八处：去掉paid前的were。考查语态。动词短语pay off表示＂得到回报＂，是不及物动词，无被动语态，故去掉were。
第九处：proud改为proudly。考查副词。修饰动词took，应用副词，故将proud改为proudly。
第十处：them改为us。考查代词。本文叙述故事用的是第一人称，故将them改为us。
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