Question

【题目】 短文改错(共10小题；每小题l分，满分10分)

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(＼)划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last week, we all feel terribly sorry to hear that our class teacher was severely ill. Afterwards, we had a discussion and decided to deal something with it on our own. During the following days, all of us did a good job. None of us was late for school and we did morning exercises best than ever. In class, we listened to the teacher attentive. Besides, we won the school basketball match. The day before our class teacher came back, we gave the classroom thorough sweep to welcome her. Our monitor presented a bunch of flowers with her when she stepped onto the platform. Seen the red flag for Weekly Model Class, she was in high spirit and deeply moved. We were greatly inspired, either, because we succeeded in managing on our own, that proves that we have grown up.

Answer 1

【答案】

Last week, we all terribly sorry to hear that our class teacher was severely ill. Afterwards, we had a discussion and decided to deal with it on our own. During the following days, all of us did a good job. None of us was late for school and we did morning exercises than ever. In class, we listened to the teacher . Besides, we won the school basketball match. The day before our class teacher came back, we gave the classroom thorough sweep to welcome her. Our monitor presented a bunch of flowers her when she stepped onto the platform. the red flag for Weekly Model Class, she was in high and deeply moved. We were greatly inspired, , because we succeeded in managing on our own, proves that we have grown up.

【解析】

第一处：feel→felt。Last week是表示过去的时间状语，故谓语动词用一般过去时。

第二处：去掉something。deal with＂解决，应付，处理＂为固定用法，deal此时为不及物动词，其后不可直接加宾语，故something是多余的。

第三处：best→better。than是关键词，暗示前边用比较级。

第四处：attentive→attentively。修饰动词应用副词。

第五处：thorough前加a。sweep表示＂打扫，清扫＂时是可数名词，且此处第一次提到，表示泛指，故应用不定冠词a。a thorough sweep＂大扫除＂。

第六处：with→to。present sth. to sb.=present sb. with sth.＂赠送某人某物＂。

第七处：Seen→Seeing。see与其逻辑主语she之间为主谓关系，应用现在分词短语作状语。

第八处：spirit→spirits。in high spirits是固定搭配，表示＂情绪高昂＂。

第九处：either→too。too和either都可以用于句末表示＂也＂，但前者用于肯定句，后者用于否定句。

第十处：that→which。关系代词which在此引导非限制性定语从句并在从句中充当主语。that不可引导非限制性定语从句。