Question

【题目】Correction 1(2017届黑龙江省大庆实验中学高三仿真模拟)

I was riding in a taxi to the bus station but from there I was supposed to taking a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat in the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took them and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the opportunity to perform an act of kindness. I want to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the brightly smile light up his face, what made me feel my heart filled with happiness.

Answer 1

【答案】

I was riding in a taxi to the bus station from there I was supposed to a bus to New York City. It was going to be long journey. I had been packed some chocolates in my suitcase to eat the way. When the ride was over, I paid the driver the due amount and gave him a tip. He got my suitcase out. I took and started walking away. However, I realized that it was one of the to perform an act of kindness. I to give away all the chocolates to the driver. After all, he had served me even though it was just his job. I gave them away and saw the smile light up his face, made me feel my heart filled with happiness.

【解析】

【文章大意】作者乘出租车去公共汽车站。到站后，作者将准备好自己路上吃的巧克力全部送给了出租车司机。作者为自己这样的善意行为感到开心。

第一处：but改为so或and。 考查并列连词。此处前后两句是因果或顺承关系，故用so/and。

第二处：taking改为take。 考查动词短语。be supposed to do sth.是固定结构，表示＂理应做某事＂。

第三处：be后加a。 考查冠词。名词journey是可数名词，该处泛指＂一个很长的旅途＂，应用不定冠词a。

第四处：去掉have后的been。 考查语态。pack是及物动词，其后有宾语chocolates，故应用主动语态，去掉been。

第五处：in改为on。 考查介词。on the way表示＂在路上＂，in the way表示＂挡住去路＂。

第六处：them改为it。考查代词。指代前面的单数名词suitcase，应用单数代词it。

第七处：opportunity改为opportunities。 考查名词。one of 后应用可数名词的复数形式，故opportunity改为opportunities。

第八处：want改为wanted。 考查时态。全文整体时态是一般过去时，故此处应用一般过去时。

第九处：brightly改为bright。 考查形容词。名词smile应用形容词作定语修饰，故将brightly改为bright。

第十：what改为which。 考查定语从句。引导非限制性定语从句，指代前面整句话的内容应用关系代词which。