题目内容
【题目】书面表达(20分)
五一节即将到来,班里的同学都在讨论如何度过这一个节日,下面是部分同学的打算,请您仔细思考,列出您五一节打算做4-5件事情,并写一篇题为“My Plans for May Day”的短文。开头已给出。要求:词数不少于60个。
Name | Things to do |
Lucy | visit Grandparents |
Jack | play games online |
Mike | go sightseeing |
I | 1._____________________ |
I | 2. __________________ |
I | 3. __________________ |
My Plans for May Day
Time flies ! May Day holiday is coming soon.
【答案】
My Plans for May Day
Time flies! May Day holiday is coming soon. My friends have some plans to do. Lucy is going to visit her grandparents. Jack is going to play games online and Mike is going sightseeing. I have some plans, too. I want to go to the beach with my parents. They are always busy with their work. I want them to have a rest. I am going to visit my grandparents in the countryside. I am also going to play chess with my cousin Linda. Besides, I am going to do some volunteer work in my community. I want to help others. I wish I can have a good holiday.
【解析】
试题分析:这篇作文以五一节假期即将到来为背景,让我们来说一说自己的假期计划。同学们也有他们自己的计划,你根据他们所说的,仔细想一想,这个假期自己打算如何度过。根据题目的要求可知,我们要列出4到5件事情。可见这是一篇话题作文,题目只给出了写作的背景,而具体的内容需要我们自己来补充。我们要先构思假期中想去做什么,这一话题我们在教材中涉及过,所以我们可以参考一下,如go to the beach,去海边,go to the mountains去爬山等等。通过分析可知,这篇短文我们应使用一般将来时态,第一人称I。写作时要注意使用好的句式,使表达更连贯。
写作亮点:这是一篇优秀的作文,短文中作者根据题目的要求,对自己五一节假期做了一个安排,写了自己假期中打算做的几件事情。首先作者先罗列了一下其他几个同学的计划,My friends have some plans to do. Lucy is going to visit her grandparents. Jack is going to play games online and Mike is going sightseeing;然后作者写了自己假期中打算做的事情,如I want to go to the beach with my parents、I am going to visit my grandparents in the countryside.、 I am also going to play chess with my cousin Linda.、 Besides, I am going to do some volunteer work in my community.等。短文中主要使用be going to 结构和want to do sth.,语言准确,意思完整,表达流畅。