Question

假如你叫王敏，是某中学初三年级学生。你的美国网友Jim发来电子邮件，告诉你他将于明年二月来中国旅游，并决定来杭州和你呆一周。但他有些情况不清楚, 请你给他回一封电子邮件。 (词数：70个左右。) 邮件必须包含以下要点：
☆Feb 6^th- Feb 24^th free (winter vacation) 
☆Meet him at Hangzhou International Airport.
☆What’s the weather like in Hangzhou?    
☆Plan four activities during his stay in Hangzhou.
Reference (参考)
灵隐寺 Lingyin Temple   西溪湿地 Xixi Wetland Park 
雷峰塔 Leifeng Pagod    龙井茶  Longjing Tea
丝绸博物馆 Silk Museum 科技博物馆 Science Museum  …  
Dear Jim,
I’m so excited that you will come to China _______________________________________ Looking forward to meeting you soon!
Yours,
Wang Min

Answer 1

Dear Jim,
I am so excited that you’ll come to China and stay with me for a week during February．
I’ll be free from February 6th to February 24th  because it’s our winter vacation and I will have much time to be with you．
When you come, I’ll meet you at Hangzhou International Airport．You worried about the weather here in your email．In fact, the weather here is a little cold in winter. So you need to take some warm clothes with you．During your stay here, I’ll take you to some places of great interest, such as Lingyin Temple and Leifeng Pagoda. Of course we won’t miss the West Lake. If you’re interested in animals, we can visit the zoo. There we can see lovely pandas. We’ll also taste Longjing Tea so that you can know more about the culture and customs here．I’m sure we’ll have a very good time together．
Looking forward to meeting you soon．
Yours,
Wang Min

解析试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作，写一封回信。本题给出的材料比较全面，我们所要做的首先是应用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来，在此基础上亦可适当发挥，注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。写作前先结合要表达的事情确定句子的人称时态，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
考点：考查应用文的写作
点评：注意写作中的时态、人称和数的问题，时态一般是一般现在时态，人称是第一人称较多。写作中语言要准确、简明，说明有条理，符合逻辑。