题目内容
书面表达(15分)
假如你是一名九年级学生,叫Mike,快要中考了,感觉压力大,请给你的好友Lucy 写一封电子邮件,倾诉你的压力以及它带来的负面影响,向她咨询缓解压力的方法。
要求:(1)观点明确,语句通顺,调理清晰。
(2)词数不少于80.
Dear Lucy,
I’m writing to tell you that I’m not feeling well now.____________________________
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Yours,
Mike
I’m under too much pressure .My parents want me to be a top student and get into the key high school, and I was sent to all kinds of after—school classes on weekends. All these make me upset, and I can’t eat well or sleep well. What’s worse, these have bad influence on my studies, and I don’t want to communicate with others, I just want to stay alone. Time flies; I’m afraid I can’t get high marks in the entrance exams. What should I do ? How can I relieve these pressure?
I’m looking forward to hearing from you !。
解析试题分析: 这是一篇应用文写作,写一封给你的朋友的电子邮件。本题给出的材料较为简略,动笔前先要围绕要点组织材料,然后用正确的英语句子把这些内容表达出来,在此基础上亦可适当发挥,注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点。根据材料可知本文主要是应用第一人称,一般现在和过去时态,注意时态和时间状语的搭配问题,注意标点符号及大小写等问题,不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系,语意连贯。
考点:应用文写作
点评:做英语书面表达时,要注意认真审题,分析体裁,确定时态;分析内容要点,列出一些基本词汇及词组;注意表达的条理性,用好连接词。最后,注意不要犯语法、句法以及搭配性错误,写好后多读多修改。