Question

假如你是小明，在英国夏令营活动中，你和来自不同国家的中学生交流了各自的职业梦想。现在请你根据表格的信息，在班会课上做一个汇报。

??? Name??????????????	??????? What	??? Why
Bobbie (UK)	??? movie star	1. popular 2. love acting
Mark? ( U.S.A)	professional basketball player	make much money play basketball very well
Xiao Ming	????? ...	... ...

注意：1. 内容必须包括表格中的信息；

2. 开头已经为你写好，请续写并完成此汇报；

?????? 3. 词数：70个左右。开头部分不计入短文词汇的总数。

Dear classmates,

?? I am reporting to tell you about our dreams. ______________________________???????????????????????

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Answer 1

【答案】

Dear classmates,

?? I am reporting to tell you about our dreams.Bobbie who is from UK wants to be a movie star.In his opinin ,movie stars are popular with most people.and he loves acting.he thinks it’s interesting and exciting to act in the movie.

Mark comes from USA.To be a professional baskball player is his job dream all the time. He thinks he would make much money if he were a famous professional baskball player.Also,he plays basktball very much.

As for me ,Iwant to be asinger because I like music and I have a nice voice.now I have music classes three times a week.

Different people have different job dreams in the summer camp.But we are all willing to try our best to achieve our dreams.

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇利用图表的给材料作文。要求介绍英国夏令营中，来自不同国家的中学生的职业梦想。主要介绍，来自哪里，职业梦想是什么，为什么有这种想法。根据内容可能会用到一般现在时和将来时。表格中给出了是三个人的名字。Bobbie ,Mark,第三人称，因为你是小明，所以介绍自己时要用第一人称I。由于介绍每个人的内容类型近似，所以要注意句式的变化。

【亮点说明】这篇短文不仅介绍人物时注意避免句式重复而且使用了大量的的短语，可见该生英语功底扎实。.如is from, comes from ,are popular with, are all willing to try our best等。句式it’s interesting and exciting to act in the movie. Bobbie who is from UK wants to be a movie star.定语从句， As for me，等，使文章的表达更丰富，更有逻辑性，更富有条理。

考点：提纲作文。